daynio Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 These are my first ever concept jersey's. These being my first ever, I am quite proud of them and I like how they turned out. If anyone has some CC on how to improve them or just comments in general I'd like to hear them.Minnesota Wild Home and Away Jersey's and new added third jersey with minnesota state logo as crestI hope you guys like themoh, by the way I'm sorry if the colours are a little off....it was the first time i used inkscape and i couldn't find the colour dabber tool thingy....so i tried to get them as close as possible manually Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phayze Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 Pretty solid all around, cept I would make the shoulder area on the red jerseys green. Other than that I like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnWis97 Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 Pretty solid all around, cept I would make the shoulder area on the red jerseys green. Other than that I like them.I agree with the green shouder area.I think these are going to be better than what the Wild come up with. (I say this as a red-alt hater). I like the traditional striping--plus it seems a bit North Stars inspired.I think the Wild have a great logo and that the circle marginalizes it. I'd rather see the full logo on the chest and the circle on the sleeves. But I know I lost on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daynio Posted July 30, 2007 Author Share Posted July 30, 2007 yes, you're right...the striping was inspired by an old minnesota north star jersey....but i canged it up a bit.And here are the updated jersey's. I made three changes on the dark jersey. First of all i changed the beige shoulders to green like u guys suggested, then i realised it would look better if the numbers were green too. I also eliminated the use of white on this jersey, because i felt it was an unnecessary addition.Hope you guys like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daynio Posted July 30, 2007 Author Share Posted July 30, 2007 Pretty solid all around, cept I would make the shoulder area on the red jerseys green. Other than that I like them.I agree with the green shouder area.I think these are going to be better than what the Wild come up with. (I say this as a red-alt hater). I like the traditional striping--plus it seems a bit North Stars inspired.I think the Wild have a great logo and that the circle marginalizes it. I'd rather see the full logo on the chest and the circle on the sleeves. But I know I lost on that.I agree with u that the wild have a great logo...one of the best in the nhl IMO. But i put the circle logo because i found it made it look classier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daynio Posted July 30, 2007 Author Share Posted July 30, 2007 if any of you know ways i can improve these i'd like to hear from you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vaytch Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 You know what, I bet if they used beige instead of white on their away jersey it would look good and would be really unique.I don't know why, but I always wanted a lightly colored away jersey, white is so boring...Maybe you should try it, who knows. Other than that I really love your design, simple and effective, all the opposite of reebok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnWis97 Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 The update is great. Removal of white from the home jersey and the switch to the green numbers.For me the only thing keeping this from being top-notch is the circle logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daynio Posted July 30, 2007 Author Share Posted July 30, 2007 You know what, I bet if they used beige instead of white on their away jersey it would look good and would be really unique.I don't know why, but I always wanted a lightly colored away jersey, white is so boring...Maybe you should try it, who knows. Other than that I really love your design, simple and effective, all the opposite of reebok here's the beige jersey...I don't like it as much as the white one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daynio Posted July 30, 2007 Author Share Posted July 30, 2007 The update is great. Removal of white from the home jersey and the switch to the green numbers.For me the only thing keeping this from being top-notch is the circle logoI'll try one with the bear head logo with no circle as the main and circle as a shoulder patch when i get back from lunch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gueman Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 Really, really solid work. I am not a fan of the circle logo, but hey it is your concept. I do think you should make a secondary logo of some type for the shoulders. Having 3 logos that are so similar are redundant. You could try a MW kind of monogram or even a play on the shooting star from the circle logo. But very neat and excellent work for your first posted concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daynio Posted July 30, 2007 Author Share Posted July 30, 2007 Really, really solid work. I am not a fan of the circle logo, but hey it is your concept. I do think you should make a secondary logo of some type for the shoulders. Having 3 logos that are so similar are redundant. You could try a MW kind of monogram or even a play on the shooting star from the circle logo. But very neat and excellent work for your first posted concept.Here is a shoulder patch i made for the minnesota wildany ideas on how to improve it? If i were to use this as a shouler patch i would switch the primary logo on the jersey to their normal primary...the bear with no circle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daynio Posted July 30, 2007 Author Share Posted July 30, 2007 Really, really solid work. I am not a fan of the circle logo, but hey it is your concept. I do think you should make a secondary logo of some type for the shoulders. Having 3 logos that are so similar are redundant. You could try a MW kind of monogram or even a play on the shooting star from the circle logo. But very neat and excellent work for your first posted concept.Here is a shoulder patch i made for the minnesota wildany ideas on how to improve it? If i were to use this as a shouler patch i would switch the primary logo on the jersey to their normal primary...the bear with no circle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daynio Posted July 30, 2007 Author Share Posted July 30, 2007 oops sry double post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jer15 Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 That patch is sick!I love how the trees form an "M" while their shadow forms a "W".Excellent work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 OMG That alt logo you made is SICK!!! I was thinking the other day of a way to make a MW type of logo. Yours is perfect.Amazing work on the jersey aswell!"Cat Eyes" - Josh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daynio Posted July 30, 2007 Author Share Posted July 30, 2007 OMG That alt logo you made is SICK!!! I was thinking the other day of a way to make a MW type of logo. Yours is perfect.Amazing work on the jersey aswell!"Cat Eyes" - JoshThanks!...can u think of any ways to improve this logo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 OMG That alt logo you made is SICK!!! I was thinking the other day of a way to make a MW type of logo. Yours is perfect.Amazing work on the jersey aswell!"Cat Eyes" - JoshThanks!...can u think of any ways to improve this logo?Not really. Its pretty much perfect IMO! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jer15 Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 For the most part, I agree.I think maybe the thin tan color outline around the edge isn't necessary, but it doesn't ruin anything either.Short of that, maybe another logo that's in a circular shape is too many circle logos, you know? It's just a thought, but maybe incorporate the state shape, like we've been seeing on the boards here lately. Again, not necessary, but something that's worth a shot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daynio Posted July 30, 2007 Author Share Posted July 30, 2007 so do u guys think i should use this as the shoulder patch and replace the bear head in the circle logo with just the bear head as the primary? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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