GMS1122 Posted January 24, 2004 Share Posted January 24, 2004 Here's a concept I've been working on for IowaFan's fantasy college team, the Midwest State Hawks. It's my first full fledged (sp?) concept logo since geeee...October :laugh: I'd like this to turn out better than what it is now, so for those of you that havent (or have) seen it yet, give me some comments, suggestions, criticism, whatever. If you have something to say i want to hear it, good or bad. GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiasco! Posted January 24, 2004 Share Posted January 24, 2004 looks good to me. the only thing i'd like to see is either a little definition in the body and wings or a name change to 'nighthawks' if it's gonna stay with the dark body.i do think it looks really good, though. LinkedIn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puckcool22 Posted January 24, 2004 Share Posted January 24, 2004 i see no problem with this- nighthawks may sound seem a little better with this logo thoughthis color scheme is great too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted January 24, 2004 Author Share Posted January 24, 2004 thanks for the comments guys, i'll look into some of those suggestions GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IowaFan26 Posted January 24, 2004 Share Posted January 24, 2004 Hmm, not quite what I envisioned. It looks good, just not what I had going in my mind, unfortuantely my artistic abilities disable me from being able to draw what I'm thinking. :angry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted January 24, 2004 Author Share Posted January 24, 2004 well then, what did you envision? ??? GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted January 24, 2004 Author Share Posted January 24, 2004 after hearing from bp himself, he's suggested i make these changes, what do you think? GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiasco! Posted January 24, 2004 Share Posted January 24, 2004 the colors are nice, but i liked the original wordmark better. (even though i'm not a fan of serifs) LinkedIn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IowaFan26 Posted January 24, 2004 Share Posted January 24, 2004 I'm actually going from a local high school team. My girlfriend goes to it and I have a huge amount of friends who go there too. Their colors are black and orange and their font is more block. And I'm just more a block font man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted January 24, 2004 Author Share Posted January 24, 2004 above post edited....Helmet added GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JQK Posted January 24, 2004 Share Posted January 24, 2004 I like the modified word mark.. i was never a fan of those angled serifs. But the helmet... errrrrr.. i'd change it... you don't wanna look like a team full of players with Mutliple Sclirosis Stay Tuned Sports Podcast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted January 25, 2004 Author Share Posted January 25, 2004 I like the modified word mark.. i was never a fan of those angled serifs. But the helmet... errrrrr.. i'd change it... you don't wanna look like a team full of players with Mutliple Sclirosis ...not my idea, i'm just following instructions GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NJTank Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 THis is intrestingIf you look up thing for Montclair State Universiuty you may find some intretsing logos espeially since they are the Redhawks. www.sportsecyclopedia.com For the best in sports history go to the Sports E-Cyclopedia at http://www.sportsecyclopedia.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted January 25, 2004 Author Share Posted January 25, 2004 THis is intrestingIf you look up thing for Montclair State Universiuty you may find some intretsing logos espeially since they are the Redhawks.i looked it up, im wasnt really sure what i was looking for, i suspected a logo that looked just like mine. Didnt find one, maybe i wasnt looking hard enough? ??? GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 The first one looks more menacing as the talons are more prominent. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NJTank Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 Heres alink to the atheltcis page on the MSU website.MSU Redhawks www.sportsecyclopedia.com For the best in sports history go to the Sports E-Cyclopedia at http://www.sportsecyclopedia.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
number55 Posted January 25, 2004 Share Posted January 25, 2004 I love the MSU element of the wordmark in the first one, but the bird element and "hawks" wordmark from the second. Did that make sense? The sharpness and prominent talons work really well to make this a fierce logo IMHO.All in all I love, and if it gets discarded would love to use it for one of my teams Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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