DawgPacPBH Posted October 11, 2007 Share Posted October 11, 2007 Some of you may remember my old Blue Jays logo where someone said it would be good as a seahawks logo, so I went with it and this is what I came up with.You have to like my style to like this at all, which since nobody comments my stuff, I guess only a few of you like the straight line, angle look.C+C welcome. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koizim Posted October 11, 2007 Share Posted October 11, 2007 Ummm....it kind of looks like a rooster wearing a prehistoric shellfish on its head. Engine, Engine, Number Nine, on the New York transit line, If my train goes off the track, pick it up! Pick it up! Pick it up! Back on the scene, crispy and clean, You can try, but then why, 'cause you can't intervene. We be the outcast, down for the settle. Won't play the rock, won't play the pebble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 It looks like a bird Pokemon with a mask. Make the colors and shapes flow more and it'll look sleeker. The current logo is a good example of this. This looks like it just came out of a big fight. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CS85 Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 Looks like a pokemon wearing a bone mask. Joking aside, render the beak a different color, maybe smooth out the image so it's not as jagged and craggy. Quote "You are nothing more than a small cancer on this message board. You are not entertaining, you are a complete joke." twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oncewaslost Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 switch the color scheme to a silver/black/red/white and you may have a nice condor logo there. Other than that it does not scream Seahawk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted October 13, 2007 Author Share Posted October 13, 2007 this any better?Wanted to incorporate the lime green a little more, too. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted October 13, 2007 Share Posted October 13, 2007 It still looks like a ton of shapes thrown together. Make it flow more. It's the beak that needs fixing still. Maybe make it a little longer, and maybe curve the bottom so it curves with the feathers below erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted October 13, 2007 Share Posted October 13, 2007 i think one of the problems with this concept is that the beak may be the only thing that needs green. i think the other part thats green could be turned white, or blue. second of all, i dont think that is the shape of a seahawks head. the back part that is. its almost if you took your thumb, covered up the green beak, it looks like the big blue part is a beak and the eye is just backwards. i think you need to re-work the back of the head to make it more hawk-like.and i would also play with the beak more, especially the bottom jaw. maybe bring it in more and have it end just before/after the black part of the top beak. i think that would make the beak more imposing.overall...much better than the original one you posted. very good follow up. i would like to see this concept progress more, i think it could turn out pretty cool. i do appreciate your style. keep working with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VC// Posted October 13, 2007 Share Posted October 13, 2007 The beak doesn't flow with the head, it looks like you just threw it in, you have to make it look like it belongs. LETS GO PENGUINS! 5x Stanley Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted October 13, 2007 Share Posted October 13, 2007 The design itself reminds me of one of San Diego State's logos. Just swap out the colors for black, red and gold. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted October 13, 2007 Author Share Posted October 13, 2007 Update 3 peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
santoleri3 Posted October 14, 2007 Share Posted October 14, 2007 I think it works better, shape wise, as a bluejay. I like the first revision, with the single curve at the neck, better than the 3 pointed neckline on the second revision. I have to say, I really don't like Seattle's color scheme, but I do like what you did with it in the first 2 concepts. Courtesy chapeeko Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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