DawgPacPBH Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 Team 1: Dallas StarsTeam 2: Tampa Bay LightningTeam 3: New York RangersEDIT: NOW A VERSION 2!There is just about nothing I wanted to change about the logo, so I kept it basically the same plus an outline. Uniforms are a little different, but they are a nice EDGE concept from my standpoint. Also, their current jerseys were just annoyingly plain so I added an interesting insert near the sides.VERSION 1VERSION 2 peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsM29 Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 This is yet another very strong concept. Keep up the good work. I'm really begining to look forward to your concepts coming out. Maybe try their old font though?p.s. you made the mistake on the template again on the back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted November 19, 2007 Author Share Posted November 19, 2007 oh damn I swore I fixed it on one of my concepts. Oh well haha. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 oh damn I swore I fixed it on one of my concepts. Oh well haha.You kinda fixed it on your Lightning concept (although you deleted the wrong part of the jersey and now the back is too short). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 Its good but the leafs have alot of tradition in their unifourms and this doest stay with alot of the tradition. Thats one thing that leafs would not be ready for I dont think. And its hard to look at their future when they have such a great history. Good job but I dont think that it fits the leafs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted November 19, 2007 Author Share Posted November 19, 2007 yeah I got you but everyone says the leafs EDGE jersey was TOO boring. I think I found a happy mediumBetween new and traditional. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 These would be much nicer if you ditched the lace up collar and went with a similar vertical striping pattern up the sleeves. The striping on the sleeves and the lower striping is totally mismatched right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 I actually really like this. My only suggestion would be to use the white logo on the blue jersey and get rid of the outline you have around the logo. Other than that, solid. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 Great job;The only thing I dont like about it, is it reminds me of these:(which I don't like at all, but somehow I really like this concept)And I think you forgot sleeve numbers on the whites.I agree you should use the white logo on the blue jersey.Also, I think if you're going to have those inserts on the shoulders of the jersey, put them on both jerseys.B+Could be an A+ with those corrections. | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted November 20, 2007 Author Share Posted November 20, 2007 Thanks for the ideas, guys! Implemented what I wanted to, what do you guys think now? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted November 20, 2007 Share Posted November 20, 2007 this is your best concept ever, imo. i really really like it. it's simplistic enough to not be a shock to the senses for a traditional team, but it's also quite modern.i really like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oddball Posted November 20, 2007 Share Posted November 20, 2007 My critical question is this, how is this less boring? You sit there and say less boring and yet all you did was and a side stripe to each side? It's great you stayed conservative for the traditionalist, but you can't sit there and say less boring and just add vertical stripes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted November 20, 2007 Author Share Posted November 20, 2007 My critical question is this, how is this less boring? You sit there and say less boring and yet all you did was and a side stripe to each side? It's great you stayed conservative for the traditionalist, but you can't sit there and say less boring and just add vertical stripes.Well, I meant less boring for the Leafs, which it is. I guess it shouldn't have been such a general statement. Compared to what they wear now, it IS less boring with adding the shoulder inserts and side stripes. Though they may seem minimal to you, in actual terms of a jersey, they are big pieces. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted November 20, 2007 Share Posted November 20, 2007 it's more than just adding a verticle stripe, and one shoulder stripe, imo.it breaks up the giant fields of blue, and gives it more visual interest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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