DawgPacPBH Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 Well, I'm not too good at writeups. Comment PLEASE, feedback helps me get better.New Primary, Alternate, Home + Away.EDIT: new logos/new alts/edited jersey design. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burgess Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 I'd make the alternate logo the primary logo, and vice versa. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnWis97 Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 I like the color scheme, but the "EDM" is something that may not stand the test of time. The alt is good, but the current primary is still the best. Disclaimer: If this comment is about an NBA uniform from 2017-2018 or later, do not constitute a lack of acknowledgement of the corporate logo to mean anything other than "the corporate logo is terrible and makes the uniform significantly worse." BADGERS TWINS VIKINGS TIMBERWOLVES WILD POTD (Shared) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted November 28, 2007 Author Share Posted November 28, 2007 I like the color scheme, but the "EDM" is something that may not stand the test of time. The alt is good, but the current primary is still the best.Here is something I can't disagree with, haha. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MiK Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 I love these. Color scheme is great, looks smooth and new. I agree with the others above about EDM. Maybe put an arched "Oilers" over a smaller "Edmonton" in the red box. Looks great though. 73, 77, 81, 83, 90, 06 29, 30, 31, 36, 39, 44, 61, 62, 65, 66, 67, 96, 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted November 28, 2007 Author Share Posted November 28, 2007 Here's an alternate uniform<3 peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishheatcats Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 Colors and jerseys are fantastic, but I'm not sure about the logos... maybe a Caps-style tweak of the old school one would be better. Flight 19 ::: Fort Lauderdale Soccer Supporters ::: DEFEND THE FORT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
penguin20 Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 Good work on these jerseys overall. Try adding more re to the primary logo though because as it is there is so very little on the primary and then a fair amount on the secondary. Also try a more modern font, the numbers don't seem to fit with the modern jersey style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charger77 Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 I like the Alt. Id make your home and road the same as the alt, the new oiler colors but with the traditional log.Dan PotD May 11th, 2011looooooogodud: June 7th 2010 - July 5th 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spezza19 Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 I like where the first two are goingand I definatly love the alternate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 I think the jersey would be better if there wasn't that weird curved stripe under the armpit. It seems like it doesn't belong with the rest of the classic-looking stripes. Great logo though. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted November 29, 2007 Author Share Posted November 29, 2007 UPDATED ALOT peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jOkeR Posted November 29, 2007 Share Posted November 29, 2007 I think you should totally ditch the "EDM" logo on the home and away jersey's, the abbreviation just doesnt look good. If you replace it on those jerseys with the "Edmonton" logo, I think it would look much better. It looks good on the Copper Alternate.Then just have no shoulder logos on the throwback colored one, to give it that old time feel.My 2 cents. Lebanon Warrior Football Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gingerbreadmann Posted November 29, 2007 Share Posted November 29, 2007 For the most part, I really like the new update. However, I think the 2nd logo could work as a primary like it was, but it needs some red in it(probably the bottom shine on "edmonton" or the stripe-y thing above the 2nd "O"). I would personally like it just as much if not better than the primary, if it had another color..I love the primary jerseys. A+! (the only gripes I have are:-the red outlines on the numbers/names/logo/stripe, make it darker or change it!-get rid of the armpit curve stripe under the armpit, unless you did and it's a shadow, I can't tell.-make the player names straight, not curved. The jersey feels quite rounded already.-Make the shoulder logos smaller, althought I really like it.) I love them though, I can't say that enough.The Alts are okay, the First one is pretty good, only because it is throwback-style.The second one, though, no offense, is really bad, IMO. It's the only really bad thing about this concept. I can't take all the brown. It screams for more color! Kudos though for using the secondary logo on them.Thanks for doing these. You (for the most part) nailed it. Great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted November 29, 2007 Share Posted November 29, 2007 Very nice! I really like everything except for the EDM logo (as said before) and the red. I would change the red to orange so that it stays at least a little with what the colors are now. Everything else looks great though. Very nice job! Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cjbraun Posted November 29, 2007 Share Posted November 29, 2007 I like everything in this concept except two things. The "EDM" doesnt do miracles for me as others have stated and, I dont like the 2nd alternative jersey, I just dont like the colour. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishheatcats Posted November 29, 2007 Share Posted November 29, 2007 Excellent update. I think the Edmonton logo works well as an alternate, but I would ditch the EDM one. I actually like the curved stripes and the new colors are great. Good stuff. Flight 19 ::: Fort Lauderdale Soccer Supporters ::: DEFEND THE FORT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gingerbreadmann Posted November 29, 2007 Share Posted November 29, 2007 Everyone seems to be hating on the EDM logos, but I will say that I like them. They are not the primary, after all, and only are the shoulder patches. Plus they are quite pleasing. Stick with them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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habsfan1 Posted November 29, 2007 Share Posted November 29, 2007 Here's an alternate uniform<3The best one of the bunch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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