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phoenixsplash

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Random stripes = bad

Spear on the back = bad

Number near the crotch = bad

Big and small caps on the nameplate = bad

Thin font = bad

Striping that overlaps template outlines = bad

Not mentioning whose logo you swiped for the helmet = bad

Everything else = good. It has a lot of potential, it just needs to be cleaned up.

Not bad for your first.

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