phoenixsplash Posted December 13, 2007 Share Posted December 13, 2007 kinda went crazy with this one. tips would be very helpful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 alright, here we go, lets see if i can help ya out. 1. i like the stripes around the number, but they limit the size of the number, make the stripes end closer to the side of the jersey so the number can be seen. 2. make the number bigger, much BIGGER3. remove the logo from behind the logo, it looks way to crowded, maybe move it to the sleeve area4. the stripe on the pants is different, it can be good in my opinion if you add a vertical line to the side of the pants and attach it to the existent line, it look wierd that it just ends, ya know what i mean?5. get rid of the shoulder stripes, it is already a busy look. don't overdo it6. make the name on the back bigger7. maybe make the pants red or white, it kinda looks like the mcdonalds team right nowhopefully these were helpful, keep on designing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shumway Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 I prefer the old Harlem Heat uniforms, to be honest: A few tips/pointers/thoughts:- Is it just me, or are there no numbers whatsoever? Unless that's a "5" in the middle.- The red on the pants/shoulders...its it just a triangle? - Lowercase letters on the nameplate...probably not goodEdit: A bit too slow. You beat me to it, Mingsy. Eh, screw it, I'm leaving my picture up, even though it's the same one you posted. Can you dig that, succccckkkkkkaaaaa?!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sharplcd Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 Awww you got me excitedI was hoping for thisEDIT: looks like Josh and Shumway beat me to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 Thought you could get away with it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phoenixsplash Posted December 14, 2007 Author Share Posted December 14, 2007 ^^ haha yeah, i used the logo in the endzone was i was creating a field for them, and i relaly liked it so i was trying to incorporate that logo into the jersey someway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFoA Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 Thought you could get away with it... I noticed that. Cool idea. Howevuh, what about when you have more than one number? I guess the rest of the H would be overshadowed.Maybe make the arrows at the legs wrap around the leg. Like <----------->, if you can catch my drift. Also try to continue the arrows on the shoulders as well. I guess this is my attempt at trying to make a weird ass concept look like a more aesthetically pleasing weird ass concept?(and lol @ me not being the only one expecting a Booker-T/Stevie Ray concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phoenixsplash Posted December 14, 2007 Author Share Posted December 14, 2007 ^ hey thanks. imma work on it later, and ill post it using osme of your guys's ideas. im such a nub at this...so anything helps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BucsBoy02 Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 Eh not feeling it. I've never been a fan of stripes on the body of the jersey like that.Thought you could get away with it... and by the way could you tell me what font that 5 is? ^^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phoenixsplash Posted December 14, 2007 Author Share Posted December 14, 2007 its in the templates, the fittend numbers one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phoenixsplash Posted December 14, 2007 Author Share Posted December 14, 2007 what you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 It's a unique idea, but I agree with some of the others. Maybe if there was a way you could make the triangles somehow wrap around the pants or the jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ars427x Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 Harlem Heat is gonna take ya down to 110th Street! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 Eh not feeling it. I've never been a fan of stripes on the body of the jersey like that.Thought you could get away with it... and by the way could you tell me what font that 5 is? ^^^^Sabres. w/ outline stroke jacked up to like 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JH42XCC Posted December 15, 2007 Share Posted December 15, 2007 UGLY!!!I say....... BURN IT TO HELL!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted December 15, 2007 Share Posted December 15, 2007 UGLY!!!I say....... BURN IT TO HELL!!!I say shut up. At least the guy is trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phoenixsplash Posted December 15, 2007 Author Share Posted December 15, 2007 ^ hey thanksi dont mind getting critiqued, but pointless posts, to try and detour me are not appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted December 15, 2007 Share Posted December 15, 2007 Thought you could get away with it... I give you a HI-5 for that one.Okay, really bad pun there... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winghaz Posted December 15, 2007 Share Posted December 15, 2007 Nice idea, but the numbers are hard to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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