JWoods077 Posted December 21, 2007 Share Posted December 21, 2007 Hey everyone,I posted a logo for this concept awhile back with only one reply so hopefully on this revision I can get more C&C. Its for a MLS team - Brooklyn FC - I put together the template from a pic of an Arsenal jersey and the look of Olympique Lyonnes jersey set. I used socks from one of the templates provided at the top. Tell me whats good, whats bad, what could be changed.UPDATES BELOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted December 21, 2007 Share Posted December 21, 2007 I like it. However, the white uniform could use some more color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted December 21, 2007 Share Posted December 21, 2007 I agree with Patsox, but I think both could use a little more color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mantleisthebest7 Posted December 21, 2007 Share Posted December 21, 2007 I do agree with that the white one needs a little more. (Perhaps black socks?) But man, I LOVE this idea. That black one is intimidating, and I like it. I dont think you really need to change the black one. Although, I think either the team name or sponsor would be good on these. Other than that, these are really, really nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JWoods077 Posted December 21, 2007 Author Share Posted December 21, 2007 I wanted to put numbers on there, but didn't have the nike font (anybody want to send it to me?), and couldn't decide what company to put on there for sponsorship, and wanted to decide on one since i figured i'd have to end up vecotrizing it in illustrator.After numbers and sponsor is up, i think it will have enough color - otherwise i'll look to add more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mantleisthebest7 Posted December 21, 2007 Share Posted December 21, 2007 Hmmm....whats a good sponsorship......im trying to think of locals. Maybe New York Life (IDK what they are, I just see commercials for them all the time) or something. If all else fails, I dont see why just "Brooklyn FC" across the front would be bad. IDK im just tryin to help ya out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted December 21, 2007 Share Posted December 21, 2007 New York Times would be a good sponsor.Nice looking logo, but the uniforms definately need some more pizazze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mania Posted December 21, 2007 Share Posted December 21, 2007 just a suggestion, for company vector logos try:http://www.brandsoftheworld.comAnd how about citibank? I have a feeling they'd fit in.As far as the concept, I'd stripe the socks, with the striping pattern running vertical on the jerseys, only horizontal.And I'd also put a little black in the white jersey and white in the black... maybe piping on the sides of the stripes and one down the middle?Where on the white it would be black piping/blue stripe/black piping/orange stripe/black piping.Also, I'd work on the badge... I know where you're coming from, but from first glance, it looks more like an M. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JWoods077 Posted December 21, 2007 Author Share Posted December 21, 2007 Update, tried two different sponsors. I know Roc-A-Fella would never sponsor a team, but Jay's from Brooklyn. Also wanted to have different stripe patterns for each set, so one wasnt the inverse of the other. C&C always appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted December 21, 2007 Share Posted December 21, 2007 Update, tried two different sponsors. I know Roc-A-Fella would never sponsor a team, but Jay's from Brooklyn. Also wanted to have different stripe patterns for each set, so one wasnt the inverse of the other. C&C always appreciated.That's the old CitiBank logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JWoods077 Posted December 21, 2007 Author Share Posted December 21, 2007 My bad, that was the first one that popped up on the website of company's vector logos - actually like the look of NYT more though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leafsfan_101 Posted December 21, 2007 Share Posted December 21, 2007 Great concept Jwoods! I love the template you have there. Could u PM me a raster version of it. Thanks alot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JWoods077 Posted December 23, 2007 Author Share Posted December 23, 2007 Final versions. Would appreciate C&C so I can improve later on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted December 23, 2007 Share Posted December 23, 2007 Looks a lot better than the original. I don't know about the stripes on both sides of the shorts, I think it'd be more fluent and iconic if the stripes were just on one side like with the shirt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bigboy1083 Posted December 23, 2007 Share Posted December 23, 2007 I like this a lot. Great progression of a concept. I like the use of the Knicks colors, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted December 23, 2007 Share Posted December 23, 2007 Looks a lot better than the original. I don't know about the stripes on both sides of the shorts, I think it'd be more fluent and iconic if the stripes were just on one side like with the shirt.I agree with that and would also like to know why on the black kit the striping is the same as the last edition rather than the white kit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JWoods077 Posted December 25, 2007 Author Share Posted December 25, 2007 Looks a lot better than the original. I don't know about the stripes on both sides of the shorts, I think it'd be more fluent and iconic if the stripes were just on one side like with the shirt.I agree with that and would also like to know why on the black kit the striping is the same as the last edition rather than the white kit.I just felt like it was a way of giving a difference to the two kits. As I said in my first post, very inspired by Olympique Lyon - Home - http://boutique.olweb.fr/en_nv_fiche__OL-h...ids-121488.htmlThird - http://boutique.olweb.fr/en_nv_fiche__OL-T...ids-121299.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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