floydnimrod Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 I've brought back the Dinosaur logo, and changed the red to orange.Also, new jerseys.C+C please. Mancakes: The Bandhttps://twitter.com/FloydNimrod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Am A Flaming Douche Bag Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 NO!Im sorry man but you took an already good looking uniform and turned it into something I wouldnt want an NBDL team to be wearing. The jersey template is awful, I hate the pattern you used. The colours are terrible as well, keep the Raptors as red, white and black.Im sorry but this is far, far from being a good concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 i have to agree...maybe not quite as emphatically, but yeah this is a nope.the orange looks like u just got the red messed up and the uni design and template is too complex and "nbdl" im not really sure where u could go with this other than start from scratch again...sry. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 I kind of have to agree with some of what c0nr4d and Pritch said.I will try and provide some useful criticism though.-I'd start by simplifying the jersey design, I realize you were going for something unique but it's not really working, IMO, all you really have to do is get rid of the crazy shorts striping, and maybe make the shoulder "yoke' a little smaller-If you really really feel the need for the orange in there, I guess it could work, but I'd switch back to red-make the silver jersey white, I don't think a silver jersey would work as a home uniform-And put a logo on the shorts, it would complete them a little better-Also rid the jersey of the adidas logo, it's not on game-jerseys (I know, a very small critique)I think silver is a tad-bit overused here. Minimize the amount of silver used, and make some of those changes, and you could, potentially, have a solid concept. | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 it could work if you make the "raptors" on the front bigger. make the silver jersey white. and the orange one should say"toronto". i love the logo though THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J23P Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 i think they jersey style is dope and i like the colors. i do agree that the grey should be white. i am with the majority on this not being for the raptors but for maybe the bobcats or even OKC. i pray that the sonics stay and that OKC becomes an expansion and st. louis will one day be granted a team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoDawgs08 Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 The color scheme def has some potential, esp since they are dinosaurs...but as far as the uniforms go, horrible. These look like really bad college unis, go back and give us a better uniform set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
floydnimrod Posted May 26, 2008 Author Share Posted May 26, 2008 Thanks for the C+C guys, I'll try to get something back up here soon.As for the orange......I was inspired by a picture I saw in GBM's custom cover thread that showed Chris Bosh in a Raptors jerseys in which the lighting made it appear orange, so I took that orange and thought I would experiment with it. I'm going to keep the orange though, and minimize the use of the silver.I'll also make the home jersey white.I will also remove the adidas logo The only thing keeping me from posting something now is the lack of an idea for the shorts striping. Mancakes: The Bandhttps://twitter.com/FloydNimrod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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koizim Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 The problem now is that it's simply an orange recolor, which, in my opinion, is a downgrade over the red. However, you do score bonus points for the Flight of the Concords avatar. Engine, Engine, Number Nine, on the New York transit line, If my train goes off the track, pick it up! Pick it up! Pick it up! Back on the scene, crispy and clean, You can try, but then why, 'cause you can't intervene. We be the outcast, down for the settle. Won't play the rock, won't play the pebble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 So you recolored three logos, one of which you got from sportslogos.net that is cropped off and you never bothered to fix it, and you made new jerseys. I am going to say, how about you fix that logo that is cropped off and find a new color scheme and maybe add a logo that you made. Add some new jerseys too, that should be a start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jer15 Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 I have to ask "why orange?"I could understand purple (and I'm dieing to see it back) but not the orange. GTA United(USA) 2015 + 2016 USA Champions/Toronto Maroons (ULL)2014, 2015 + 2022 Gait Cup Champions/Toronto Northmen (TNFF) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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