elliott Posted October 22, 2008 Share Posted October 22, 2008 Pronger=25It's obviously better than your old one, I actually like the piping in this instance, but it is still really sloppy. I think you will get better in time though, in terms of cleanliness.Ever thought about downloading Inkscape for free. I use Illustrator so I wouldn't know about it, but I would recommend it for Windows users, and I'm sure a lot of other people would, too. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted October 22, 2008 Author Share Posted October 22, 2008 Pronger=25It's obviously better than your old one, I actually like the piping in this instance, but it is still really sloppy. I think you will get better in time though, in terms of cleanliness.Ever thought about downloading Inkscape for free. I use Illustrator so I wouldn't know about it, but I would recommend it for Windows users, and I'm sure a lot of other people would, too.If it's free I'm all for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted October 22, 2008 Author Share Posted October 22, 2008 Here is the Thrashers. I think this turned out pretty good, but I think it is a little plain. Let's see what you guys think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benpc21 Posted October 23, 2008 Share Posted October 23, 2008 I like the the progression to the Thrashers jersey. I think two things to do to make it less plain would be to add the "T" logo to the sleeves in the navy and add the Thrashers word mark below the collar like most NFL teams have done. Other than that, the thrashers is solid. Maybe some logo on the pants. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burgess Posted October 23, 2008 Share Posted October 23, 2008 Nice work on the Atlanta jersey.Just a thought to expand on ben's comment - does anyone think Atlanta's new third jersey wordmark would look good in that space? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted October 23, 2008 Share Posted October 23, 2008 Maybe enlarge and turn the helmet logo, so that its flying forward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted October 23, 2008 Author Share Posted October 23, 2008 I like the the progression to the Thrashers jersey. I think two things to do to make it less plain would be to add the "T" logo to the sleeves in the navy and add the Thrashers word mark below the collar like most NFL teams have done. Other than that, the thrashers is solid. Maybe some logo on the pants.Yes I was thinking of adding a sleeve logo. It is plain. I will probably post an update within the night hopefully.Thanks for the comments so far guys, I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted October 23, 2008 Share Posted October 23, 2008 Maybe enlarge and turn the helmet logo, so that its flying forward.Well, it's supposed to be a T. So then you lose that. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted October 24, 2008 Author Share Posted October 24, 2008 Here is an updated version of the Thrashers. I just added a chest script and sleeve logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpokedB Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 Thats awesome. Since the Bruins have one of the best uniforms in the RBK Edge era, could you try your hand at one of those??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 Save your files in PNG!Will make them look so much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coast2CoastAM2006 Posted October 24, 2008 Share Posted October 24, 2008 Here is the Ducks. I kept their striping in a way, but put it on the shoulders. I made the piping orange because it looked better than when it was gold. I also changed their numbers. Forgive me if Pronger's number isn't 97 I'm not positive. One more thing quick: the helmet is a little sloppy and I am sorry about that.Enjoy. C&C.2 things about this concept:1. This maybe the one rare time where all monochrome black looks actually good. I generally hate monochrome especially monochrome black, but this looks really good. In fact if you was to add gold, orange or white pants, i don't think it would look as good.2. The webbed D is better suited for a football helmet than a primary logo on a hockey jersey. as for the thrashers, add some red piping and your good. Spoilers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted October 25, 2008 Author Share Posted October 25, 2008 Save your files in PNG!Will make them look so much better.How do you do that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scarsofthumper Posted October 25, 2008 Share Posted October 25, 2008 Hell, for the Trashers you could just cut shorten the sleeves on the 3rd jerseys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigga Posted October 25, 2008 Share Posted October 25, 2008 Since these are crossover concepts, you may want to download the TrueType Font packs in eriqjaffe's signature. Even if they aren't completely up to date, the concepts will look more crossed over instead of generic nameplates and relatively mismatched numbers. On January 16, 2013 at 3:49 PM, NJTank said: Btw this is old hat for Notre Dame. Knits Rockne made up George Tip's death bed speech. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted October 25, 2008 Author Share Posted October 25, 2008 Someone earlier requested the Bruins, so here they are.Enjoy. C&C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted October 25, 2008 Share Posted October 25, 2008 I haven't checked back on this for a while, and I clicked on it half expecting to have to get my flame on again, but I have to admit, it looks like you've listened to some of the CC and are getting a little better at these. Do what the jiggaman said and get the font packs. Then maybe try to keep just a little bit more of the NHL-specific treatments - for example, the Bruins shoulder yoke trim could probably stay closer to the hockey treatment, with the white not totally wrapping around, and the Thrashers could go with the single arm thing. I'm not saying that'd make them look better, just maybe stay a little truer to the identities. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted October 29, 2008 Author Share Posted October 29, 2008 Sorry for the lapse in time from my last post, but here are the Florida Panthers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted October 31, 2008 Author Share Posted October 31, 2008 Just a quick little bump. Maple Leafs next, hopefully by tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fkaKrock5cent Posted October 31, 2008 Share Posted October 31, 2008 Sorry for the lapse in time from my last post, but here are the Florida Panthers.Your inching ever so closer to putting together some awesome stuff. I don't like the red helmate because red is only a trim color everywhere else. Go with blue or even white on this one. Please download paint.net <www.getpaint.net> and use LEWJ's template! I realize its your series but using these two make rasher concepts loook alot better then when its done then on the basic template you are using. Keep up the good work though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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