bigmike Posted November 10, 2008 Share Posted November 10, 2008 The white bolts on the Chargers uniforms really clash with the yellow bolt on the helmet.Yeah, i didn't catch that. Thank you LMU. the updated version is above. How do they look now? Any other suggestions would be greatly appreciated.Make a double outline on the bolts like the logo, switch to their numbers they have now, and you gotta a good concept! Check out my new NFL 2016 Series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riot! Posted November 11, 2008 Author Share Posted November 11, 2008 RAIDERS!!! For the Raiders i didn't do much. I treid to make them more "modern". But everything I tried looked bad or sloppy. So I stuck with their basic theme they have now. But i did add an alternate logo. And i added a set of black pants, and I changed their helmet from silver to black and simplified their primary so it would work with the black helmet. I know this wasn't much of a "revamping" but like I said everything I tried did't work. C&C please guys. And if you have some ideas for "modernizing" the Raiders let me know.Home:Away: Help Change My User Name to Riot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 I say stick with the silver helmet and maybe add like a cool R over the swords in the alternate, they look a little plain. But good job, because the Raiders are a hard team to do a concept for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riot! Posted November 11, 2008 Author Share Posted November 11, 2008 Here's the Tennessee Titans. For the Titans what I did was add more red to their uniforms. I shortened their shoulder stripes so it doesn't go past the shoulders. And I used a different pants stripe. C&C welcome.Home:Away:Alternate (Dark Blue):Alternate (Red):Also i added light blue pants, but I am not sure how I feel about them. What do you guys think. Help Change My User Name to Riot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 You've got to put an outline on the numbers, it just doesn't look good. You said you were going to add some red, so maybe make the outlines red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riot! Posted November 12, 2008 Author Share Posted November 12, 2008 You've got to put an outline on the numbers, it just doesn't look good. You said you were going to add some red, so maybe make the outlines red.Updated them with red outlines on the numbers. The updated version is above. How's it looking guys? Help Change My User Name to Riot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigmike Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 The numbers are too big, and it needs a Titans script added across the chest Check out my new NFL 2016 Series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riot! Posted November 12, 2008 Author Share Posted November 12, 2008 Now the Indianpolis Colts! For the Colts I decided to go a little outside the box for the uniforms I put the horseshoe on the unifor in a unique spot. What do you guys think? C&C Welcome.Home:Side View:Away:Side View: Help Change My User Name to Riot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShaftDu Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 hummmm......interesting? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riot! Posted November 13, 2008 Author Share Posted November 13, 2008 hummmm......interesting? haha That's exactly what I was going for! Help Change My User Name to Riot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 The Titans are much better! As for the Colts, it looks OK as the regular view, but on the side view it just looks very awkward and makes the player look fat. I would say that this was good thinking, but it doesn't quite work out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 Colts: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Hide the women and children! Cool idea, but do that with the bolt on the Bolts jersey, and on both sides. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riot! Posted November 13, 2008 Author Share Posted November 13, 2008 Ok so I decided to re-do my chiefs concept. I stuck with the whol "arrow" theme. And I also added a new alternate logo which is arrowhead. I think that it looks good. What do you guys think?Home:Away:Alternate: Help Change My User Name to Riot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riot! Posted November 13, 2008 Author Share Posted November 13, 2008 The Houston Texans!! For the Texans went with a little more modern design, while keeping relatively same concept they have now. I personally love their uniforms they have now. I also added an alternate logo, which is just a star. I wanted to incorporate the "texans" aspect. I added the star to uniform just abouve the wordmark on each side. Tell me what you guys think. C&C Welcome.Logos:Home:Away:Alternate: Help Change My User Name to Riot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 I happen to like the multicolored inserts on the shoulders, but I think the stars look out of place. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 The Chiefs looks pretty good and also I like the Texans more than their current set. The stars are a little out of place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riot! Posted November 13, 2008 Author Share Posted November 13, 2008 I happen to like the multicolored inserts on the shoulders, but I think the stars look out of place. Would it look better if I had just one star and put it in the middle in replace of the wordmark? Or just scrap the stars altogether? Help Change My User Name to Riot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 I happen to like the multicolored inserts on the shoulders, but I think the stars look out of place. Would it look better if I had just one star and put it in the middle in replace of the wordmark? Or just scrap the stars altogether?I would say scrap the stars on the shoulders, and relocated them to the sides of the pants, centered in between the multicolored stripe, white star for white pants, and blue star for blue pants. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Riot! Posted November 14, 2008 Author Share Posted November 14, 2008 So I took Elliots advice and ditched the stars on the shoulders. And I put them on the pants. Here's the updated versions.Home:Away: Alternate: C&C welcome. Help Change My User Name to Riot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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