andymorrison13 Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 I like this update much better. I can't think of anything I would change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 Logo's good but the uniform looks bad to me because it does remind me of the Sonics. Imitation is there. Today's uniform is better.Thumbs-down.Ok...but keep in mind that the jerseys I was trying to emulate were in use by the Hawks far before the Sonics ever wore theirs. The Sonics started wearing those in 2002. Actually, the Sonics resumed wearing that striping in 2002. They also wore it for a long time before the red era. The Hawks stripes didn't go down the side. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRealPepman Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 This is a very nice concept.I have never seen anything like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 20, 2008 Author Share Posted November 20, 2008 Concept 3: Utah JazzAlright, so I though going back to more purple would suite the Jazz, I scrapped navy and just went with these two colors. I used the Jazz wordmark found in the logo, but kept the Utah script they currently use. One feature to note is that one the home and alternate, the offset stroke on the numbering matches the wordmark, and on the away I kept the stroke on the numbering straight on. Just for continuity. The striping scheme is really simple. And I don't have the new template yet, but I thought I would continue the series anyway. Thanks for any comments guys.Next: Possibly Magic. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 Very nice job on these Jazz uniforms. I love how you went back to purple. Purple and light blue are not used together by any major sports team, pro or college I believe, so it's unique, but still great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 Great Stuff man, Love the Pacers Edit, Kinda simple on the last one there. Cant wait to see the Clippers and Nets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 Hey man good job on the jazz.Sorry I didn't get the template to you earlier, I just got my computer.E-mailed it your way, again sorry for the delay. Can't wait to see more now. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 20, 2008 Author Share Posted November 20, 2008 Hey man good job on the jazz.Sorry I didn't get the template to you earlier, I just got my computer.E-mailed it your way, again sorry for the delay. Can't wait to see more now.Thanks, I appreciate it. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andymorrison13 Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 Great update. I like that you brought purple back to the Jazz. The home jersey reminds me of the Kings jerseys, probably because of the number font. The 16 on the front of home jersey looked like 18 at first glance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 20, 2008 Author Share Posted November 20, 2008 Concept 4: MagicAllright, so now I have my hands on Chesnutz's template, and I worked with my layout for a while today, and I came up with something that I think is a little more polished. So all credit goes to Chesnutz once again for the template, although originally I think it was someone elses, I just can't remember their name. Like NYY something something.So for this one I went back to the old wordmarks, kept the new numbers, got rid of the pinstripes, and completely changed the side panels. Also I went back to some sublimated stars, something that I always thought was a cool idea, it just needed to be executed correctly. So I kept the stars to a pretty small amount. So C+C would still be awesome for the Jazz, I just realized that I never changed the subtitle to concept 3 so some people might not have checked. And C+C is also welcome for the new layout.Next: Grizzlies (changed up color scheme for them!) Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 This Magic concept is awesome. I love the stars that you placed around the jersey, they help it to be recognized solely as the Magic. My only complaint is that huge logo on the shorts, I think it has to shrink a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 Looks so much better on that template, though I can't take any credit for it (don't know who originally made it either).LOVE the Magic set, my favorite of your redesigns so far. The sublimated stars add so much to it. The one thing I don't like is the black numbers on the white uniforms. It'd look much better with blue letters and wordmark. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 The Jazz concept is very nice in theory, but I feel that something was lost in the execution. I see hints of Silver in there sometimes, and those should be removed IMO. I would keep it at White, Purple, Lt. Blue(great color combo, perfect for this team). The numbers should all just be 2 colors with a regular outline, don't try to match the wordmarks. In fact you should probably just take the letters from each wordmark and outline them with one color as well. That would provide some sort of continuity between the different looks. I don't know why the collar on the Lt. Blue jersey looks different, but it should probably be White. That should fix that.As for the Magic; I would just replace the White on the sidepanels of the home jersey to Silver, then swap the Blue and Black on the wordmark and numbers on the homes. I really like these overall though. The idea is great, and I love bringing back sublimated stars, but only as a small design element. I love how the stars are in one color on the jersey and the other color on the shorts. It is not predictable, and I like that. Keep it up man. I'm hoping for Brown in the Grizzlies concept. Deliver, son! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riot! Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 Looks so much better on that template, though I can't take any credit for it (don't know who originally made it either).LOVE the Magic set, my favorite of your redesigns so far. The sublimated stars add so much to it. The one thing I don't like is the black numbers on the white uniforms. It'd look much better with blue letters and wordmark.I agree, make the numbers blue. And I don't know why, but the numbers just dont look right to me. They might be a little to skinny. But thats my only gripe. Everything else looks amazing! Good job Elliott! Help Change My User Name to Riot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 20, 2008 Author Share Posted November 20, 2008 The Jazz concept is very nice in theory, but I feel that something was lost in the execution. I see hints of Silver in there sometimes, and those should be removed IMO. I would keep it at White, Purple, Lt. Blue(great color combo, perfect for this team). The numbers should all just be 2 colors with a regular outline, don't try to match the wordmarks. In fact you should probably just take the letters from each wordmark and outline them with one color as well. That would provide some sort of continuity between the different looks. I don't know why the collar on the Lt. Blue jersey looks different, but it should probably be White. That should fix that.As for the Magic; I would just replace the White on the sidepanels of the home jersey to Silver, then swap the Blue and Black on the wordmark and numbers on the homes. I really like these overall though. The idea is great, and I love bringing back sublimated stars, but only as a small design element. I love how the stars are in one color on the jersey and the other color on the shorts. It is not predictable, and I like that. Keep it up man. I'm hoping for Brown in the Grizzlies concept. Deliver, son!I was planning on doing a navy, lt blue, and gold combo. It sounds cliche but by gold I mean the type of bronzy-gold seen in Cavs or Ducks jersey. And I eliminated the light, light blue that they use in the logo and on the aways, so I ended up tweaking the logo to fit the new color scheme. I thought it looked nice (I mean the colors) but I might experiment with some brown. I'm probably going to post my original color scheme though.Here is a sneak preview:Thoughts?So, anyhow, I am going to tweak the Jazz like eRay said, and put it on the new template. Also I am going to tweak the Magic, probably blue numbers and quite possibly what eRay was saying about the side panels. Thanks for the comments though. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 Maybe brown, gold, and light blue would look good? erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 these are greatbut the jazz is a miss for me, really boring id add a pants logo or somethingreally like the magic one, though i think that the new script would be better, but thats just meand the grizzlies logo looks good so farkeep this up! @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andymorrison13 Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 The only issue i see with the magic is the logo on the shorts. It looks larger than the part of the side panel it's on, mayb lowering it would help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siegel0572 Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 You have done some great work. My favorites are the Magic and the Jazz concepts. I like the straight pinstripes as opposed to the curved ones on the Pacers uniforms. Looking foreward to the next set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 21, 2008 Author Share Posted November 21, 2008 Here is the update to the Jazz. On the new template, I tweaked the collars and wordmarks (thanks to eRay for that suggestion). Also I added the circle logo on the shorts.So tomorrow I will post the update to the Magic and also post the Grizzlies! Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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