Taylor_27 Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 Love both concepts. One thing I would change on the alternate jazz (just a suggestion) is make the collar a different colour, like white or something.Taylor_27 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mania Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 The Jazz one... just isn't really doing it for me. I dunno, man, the same things that bug me about the current Jazz set is still there, the mismatched fonts, the lack of any real identity, and the colors don't compliment each other near as well as you'd assume from brainstorming.However, I really like the Magic set, although I think it's a situation where it's begging for a black jersey, and I agree with those who say that the logo on the side should be made smaller and lower on the shorts. Off The Top Rope: A Pro Wrestling Podcast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBM Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 The Jazz... sorry, baby blue and purple is just too "girly" for me. Baby blue is one thing, purplke is one thing, but together, it looks like a WNBA uniform IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRealPepman Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 Jazz: Hate the design! Especially the garter in the shorts. Not in the right time of uniforms which are "in".Magic: One word: Nice! Except for the V-neck.Grizzlies: Hands down! Great concept. Only the logo, guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 love the magic, also do you think light blue side pannels on the jazz purple jersey, cuz i think it might look nice THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MichaelVillain Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 -The new Pacers are sweet. The tighter straight pinstripes work better. -the Jazz should have a white collar on the purple. Im not really liking the numbers. They just look a little too chunky for me. -The Magic are sweet for all the reason already mentioned. I actually like the oversized logo on the shorts. -Grizzlies color concept looks really good. Can't wait to see the uniformsLooking forward to what you do with the Lakers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 21, 2008 Author Share Posted November 21, 2008 OK, here is the update to the Magic.And...I'll have the Grizzlies concept up in a few min. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 21, 2008 Author Share Posted November 21, 2008 Concept 5: GrizzliesOk, so I already showed you the color scheme and logos, so here are the jerseys. I used the general idea of the current jersey for the tops, just modernizing it more. The pants are completely different. Obviously the alternate is based on the home and away template, I just messed with the gold stripe, adding some white.So C+C is appreciated.\Next...I'm thinking Clippers. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy B Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 I like the colors for the Grizzlies a lot. I think the road jersey would be hard to read, I don't think the tan and light blue would be distinct enough on the navy jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 I really like the Grizz color scheme, but I'm not font of the side stripes for them. I would like the stripes for a different team, but I think the Grizz have such a strong use of the skunk-stripe, that it's disappointing not to see it used anywhere but on the font. I agree with Billy B about the readability of the navy jersey. On the technical side, the striping should continue onto the waistband, so when the jerseys are tucked in, there isn't a weird gap. My only critique for the Magic is the black waistband. Make it the jersey color and put the striping on it. I love the understated use of the sublimated stars. Great colors for the Jazz, but the numerals are so thick, they would be tough to read in action, especially on the purple jersey. in addition, I think eRay was trying to say don't use drop shadows sometimes, and regular outlines the other times. Take the wordmarks and numerals and give them all a thin, consistent outline. It would add some unity to the concept. Once again watch your waistbands. Also, why not switch up the striping on the light blue set, they aren't going to mix-and-match, so they don't have to be exactly like the stripes on the other jerseys. Overall, solid work. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRealPepman Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 Uniform's not bad except for the V-stripe. Too simple. It needs to be stylish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 I actually really like the Grizz. Nice color scheme, it works very well. I'd incorporate some more white into the away though, like previously said the letters may be hard to read on the away. I'm not a fan, however, of the vertically arched names on the back. It looks like the arch is waaaaay too big, I mean it's already extremely severe on a 3 letter name, what happens if someone has a 12 letter last name? erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 22, 2008 Author Share Posted November 22, 2008 Uniform's not bad except for the V-stripe. Too simple. It needs to be stylish.I don't know what you mean by V stripe. I am going to update tomorrow, more white in the roads. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONUV Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 can you add yellow eyes like the original logo to your updated one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRealPepman Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 Uniform's not bad except for the V-stripe. Too simple. It needs to be stylish.I don't know what you mean by V stripe. I am going to update tomorrow, more white in the roads.V-neck I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 Man that Grizzlies one is awesome. That tan color brings it all together, nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 22, 2008 Author Share Posted November 22, 2008 Updated Grizz: Good call on the waistbands bohob, I really never though about that. So I changed that, added some white into the roads, and reduced the curve on the nameplate. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 22, 2008 Author Share Posted November 22, 2008 Concept 6: ClippersSo, I went with a new color scheme on this one, just regular red and blue seems overused to me, so I went with light blue and maroon. It's a pretty simple design but still relatively modern. Next: Maybe Pistons or Blazers Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 I like the Clipps and updated Griz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 no complaints exept i think the neck logo is too big try using the lac logo insted THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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