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looks a bit cartoony...i think because of the eyes.

That's my main issue with it.

I'm not sure what to do about it, though.

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I like it overall but here are my ideas.

1: add some red to the actual logo, just a bit.

2: seperate the back legs, they look like they are tied together and as a result he looks like an animal on a spit with out the fire.

3: Cola :censored: is right, tweak the eyes a bit.

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looks a bit cartoony...i think because of the eyes.

That's my main issue with it.

I'm not sure what to do about it, though.

try making the white of the eye much smaller...focus on the dark blue being the main portion and focus of the eye. that should help a bit.

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I've never seen a more disinterested buffalo! He kind of looks... agitated. A buffalo who is making such a leap would certainly have more of an expression on his face. Keep working on the eyes and mouth - those are the weakest part of this. As is, I see this more as a minor league or Japanese-league logo - which isn't a bad thing, but probably not what you were going for.

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bills-1.gif

C&C please!

Reminds me of that episode of Family Guy where Peter finds out he's black and stops smiling for the camera. The buffalo's facial expression is almost the same as Peter's.

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North Dakota State is the Bison, not the Bisons.

But I agree with you. It looks a lot like the Bison helmet logo. But, what the heck, Phil Hanson is a former Bison and Bill, so maybe it works.

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I love the cartoon references (Family Guy, Bullwinkle), but it wasn't really what I was going for haha.

I'll get a pretty much completely new design up tonight hopefully.

Thanks for the C&C guys!

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bills2-1.gif

Better? C&C please.

With that smile (grimmace?) it kinda looks like maybe you photoshopped out whatever he was railing.

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2nd version is much better, but it needs the tail. I like how you're trying to keep the same profile of the current Bills logo while incorporating both blues. I think the horn would look better if the inside curve was the same as the outside. I agree that it looks a bit cartoony, maybe add some more ripples to the fur?

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I actually liked the first one alot better, the second one needs his tail back, and I like the mouth and nose alot better on the first one, because to me the second one looks more catoonish then the first one.

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Latest:

bills-logo.png

I have no idea what to do with the face so I left it blank for now.

Any ideas, inspiration or C&C would be greatly appreciated!

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Latest:

bills-logo.png

I have no idea what to do with the face so I left it blank for now.

Any ideas, inspiration or C&C would be greatly appreciated!

Blank = Good. Don't go back to working out facial features, just keep it simple.

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