JJSCOTT Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 My brother graduated last year from the Academy and I made a lot of friends with guys on his baseball team. They want me to design their baseball shirts this year to have printed but I hate the old logo and wanted to do something a lil more modern for them. This is a couple logos I came up with... what do you guys think? any suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 The falcon logo looks great. I'm not to crazy about the 'AF' going over it, but the logo itself is excellent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burgundy Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 Very nice. I like the lightning bolt wings. I had a similar idea with Kent, but yours is much cleaner and better executed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJSCOTT Posted December 11, 2008 Author Share Posted December 11, 2008 Yeah I am not totally crazy about the one with the AF but I thought it needed AirForce or AF somewhere. Do you guys like the back wing full blue or the white? Think a taloned foot coming from underneath is needed? I had one but I didn't really like it and didn't want it looking too much like the ATL Falcons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 I personally like the one with the Blue back wing. It is simple but modern at the same time, so I don't really think you need to do anything to it. You have set it apart from the ATL Falcons nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burgundy Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 The blue wing looks better, and I don't think there's a need for talons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KJTALBOT Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 I usually don't comment on original logos (non-recolored) that people create, because I couldn't do better and you know the expression if you don't have anything nice to say . . . But, your falcon logo is outstanding. Very good work. Everyone loves a roundel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 That is simply some of the best work I have seen in a while, in any medium, digital or physical. The falcon just seems perfect to me. I kind of wish the Blue outline was a tiny bit thicker, but other than that the whole look is amazing. The lightning bolt wing makes it. I love it. Protect this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 That is simply some of the best work I have seen in a while, in any medium, digital or physical. The falcon just seems perfect to me. I kind of wish the Blue outline was a tiny bit thicker, but other than that the whole look is amazing. The lightning bolt wing makes it. I love it. Protect this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 Great job on the falcon...to me, it looks like a modernized old ATL Falcons logo but from an angle. Very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 Blue wing is definately better. It's supposed to be shadowed, not highlighted. Excellent stuff.I'd see about altering the tail just a bit, to help eliminate any little traces of "Atlanta Falcon" that may appear to be there. A slightly different tail could help. Though what you have looks great, maybe just play around with it and see what you can come up with. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben7 Posted December 15, 2008 Share Posted December 15, 2008 I love both falcons without the AF, really cool work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted December 15, 2008 Share Posted December 15, 2008 I usually don't comment on original logos (non-recolored) that people create, because I couldn't do better and you know the expression if you don't have anything nice to say . . . But, your falcon logo is outstanding. Very good work.That's actually one of the reasons why you should offer c/c to original logos. Remember, the target market for these logos is people who buy the gear, the majority of whom can't design it. If logos were designed solely to appeal to designers, it's likely that many of today's successful logos would never have been released. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJSCOTT Posted December 16, 2008 Author Share Posted December 16, 2008 played around a lil with the tail to give it a lil different look... upgrade/downgrade??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 Downgrade I'd say. Original without the AF is still the best. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 Im not feeling this one...It looks like its three wings and nobody. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 Downgrade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJSCOTT Posted December 16, 2008 Author Share Posted December 16, 2008 I prefer the original one myself... glad to see you all agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 Very nice. I like the lightning bolt wingsI agree with the group-the original logo with the AF is solid. Well done. Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 i love this logo, some of the best work on the boards in a whilemy only thought would be to add a white highlight to the near wing, its just a though and may not work out, but currently the only white is on its facemaybe just give it a try https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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