JayJaxon Posted February 17, 2009 Share Posted February 17, 2009 The green hat and gold bill will work best with the A's set. I think patsox gave you some good advice there in adding piping around the sleeves. Other than that, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 18, 2009 Author Share Posted February 18, 2009 The white is supposed to be piping, a yellow vest with white piping on the arm holes then green undershirt. Mabey i can make it more clear though THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 20, 2009 Author Share Posted February 20, 2009 any more comments before i update it? THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 21, 2009 Author Share Posted February 21, 2009 alright, i have an update of the Athletics,- I moved the scrips/numbers up- used a new green hat, trying to keep it classic but at the same time something newenjoynext team: Phillies THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crkraider22 Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 Would this be a sleeveless vest with a green undershirt, or a regular jersey. If it is the latter, it looks like something that a college team would wear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 21, 2009 Author Share Posted February 21, 2009 i have said it many times, this would be a sleeveless jersey, mabey i can alter the template to make it more obvious THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 21, 2009 Author Share Posted February 21, 2009 Alright, here are the phillies. What I did,- Made that awful looking script a different color so it would look good on a jersey.- Put that nice liberty bell logo on the sleeves.- Used their old alternate hat logo on a blue hat. Hope you like THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 22, 2009 Share Posted February 22, 2009 Um, just in general, if you think a script is awful, why would you use it? Another question: why do think it's awful? There isn't anything wrong with the Phillies script. I don't really like this jersey. The patch looks bad, it's a mostly red and white themed jersey and the blue sticks out like a sore thumb. I don't like the use of vertical chest piping here, they go with striping on the ends of sleeves in their real unis; that looks better, and yours makes it inconsistant. A red hat would look better here, I think. Also we need to see pants here. I don't believe the Phillies have a set of plain white pants. So would it be worn with pinstriped pants? Or the gray pants? If so, then the striping wouldn't match, like I explained before. Finally, you should probably use a different template. This one holds back the presentation. I think someone posted a pretty good baseball template in the paint thread recently. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted February 22, 2009 Share Posted February 22, 2009 I think this would be better if the bell was the same color as the wordmark. I don't think the wordmark looks bad white. I think the vertical piping needs to go. Maybe do something around the collar like with their 2008 alternate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted February 22, 2009 Share Posted February 22, 2009 Um, just in general, if you think a script is awful, why would you use it? Another question: why do think it's awful? There isn't anything wrong with the Phillies script. I don't really like this jersey. The patch looks bad, it's a mostly red and white themed jersey and the blue sticks out like a sore thumb. I don't like the use of vertical chest piping here, they go with striping on the ends of sleeves in their real unis; that looks better, and yours makes it inconsistant. A red hat would look better here, I think. Also we need to see pants here. I don't believe the Phillies have a set of plain white pants. So would it be worn with pinstriped pants? Or the gray pants? If so, then the striping wouldn't match, like I explained before. Finally, you should probably use a different template. This one holds back the presentation. I think someone posted a pretty good baseball template in the paint thread recently.Yeah, Patsox posted a pretty good one. And there's a couple that resemble the one Patsox posted in the Template Request topic. This one is really lop-sided. They buttons fall on the right side (players left) instead of in the middle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 23, 2009 Author Share Posted February 23, 2009 i did not mean the script was horrible, what i ment to say was the awful way it is on the bp kinda like the angles alternate where the jersey and the letters are red. keep the comments coming and i will try to updat and use all your C&C to help me out THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 23, 2009 Author Share Posted February 23, 2009 alright, well i guess i will try to do an update with the comments i have gotten so far, some more would be nice. brewers are next... THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 24, 2009 Author Share Posted February 24, 2009 alright well i still want comments on philly but on to another concept, Brewers- Used "Milwaukee" script- Supposed to be road alternate- I wanted to make an alternate hat but the one they have now worked out fineC&C THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 I'm all for using the 'Milwaukee' script but I wonder if a gold jersey would look good on the field. I just don't know about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 It just looks too plain. Needs some sort of striping. Numbers and wordmark outlines don't match, make everything look slapped together. Can't really see the sleeve logo either, gold on gold.Can't believe I'm saying this (Mets fan), but I like the Phillies one. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 24, 2009 Author Share Posted February 24, 2009 alright i hear what everyone is saying about it being too plain.So i looked at their current unis and remembered that they do use sleeve stripes so hopefully this help the uni a little THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gothamite Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 Not bad.But, looking at your disclaimer, can the modifications ever really be your property? The Green Bay Packers Uniform Database! Now in a handy blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crkraider22 Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 Listen the the comments about your template too, a new one would only make your presentation better instead of looking like the entire concept was rushed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 TBH the reason you are still looking for responses on the Phillies is because everyone wants you to update it. We told you what to do and you didn't. Instead you moved on to the next one. Finish what you started. Also listen to what we are saying about the template. And you need pants in your presentation.Sorry but I can't stand the Brewers. That color is sickly. I think the Milwaukee wordmark is too long to be on the front of a game jerseys. It might work for BP or something but it just clutters up the front, and looks too small. I think the patch would look better if the M wasn't the same color as the jersey. It looks like there is a different color gold between the blue and white in the numbers, you might want to fix that. But really I think navy looks 1000x better than this shade of gold. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 The color on the Milwaukee alternate would work. They used BP jerseys of that color for the 2002 All Star Game. However I think the color is too ugly for game use. And it wouldn't have killed you to recolor the wordmark to match the jersey instead of using the same one that is on the site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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