1stDownCreative Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 Heres a Marlins logo i did over the past couple of days...not for anything...just thought it might be fun...c&cleft shows just logo and just wordmark, right shows full setup together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 Heres a Marlins logo i did over the past couple of days...not for anything...just thought it might be fun...c&cleft shows just logo and just wordmark, right shows full setup togetherThis is really good! I like it better than their current set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 I like these a lot. A big improvement on their current logo. Maybe try taking away the water and doing another full body logo with an F or something. Overall I think this is a great concept, but I would LOVE to see the addition of orange. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 This logo is incredibly good and I would love to see the Marlins adopt this. I'd like to see if you have any ideas for a cap logo or a "Florida" wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 This logo is incredibly good and I would love to see the Marlins adopt this. I'd like to see if you have any ideas for a cap logo or a "Florida" wordmark.Probably a "Miami" wordmark considering theyre switching to the Miami Marlins in 2011. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 I love your marlin. The "Marlins" script feels like it should be on an angle or something, though. See if you can incorporate a few more tropical colors along with the "Miami" script and you could have a real hit here. ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charger77 Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 Love the logo! The word mark, not a big fan.-Dan PotD May 11th, 2011looooooogodud: June 7th 2010 - July 5th 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 See, I like it. It's playful, like a fish or a beachgoer. Sure beats the dark soulless script they use now. ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 See, I like it. It's playful, like a fish or a beachgoer. Sure beats the dark soulless script they use now.The script would be great for a Marlins minor league affiliate. Personally, I like their current wordmark, but I understand redesigning it for the purposes of doing a concept. Maybe try incorporating sleeker water lines with a more serious typeface. Other than that, the Marlin itself is spot on. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONUV Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 logo is good. wordmark isn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oddball Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 Wordmark is way too busy and it reads "Warlins" before it reads "Marlins". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 The wordmark isn't bad, but like has been said before, looks like it would be a Minor League wordmark. It could also be a good wordmark for a Long John Silver's or some seafood resturaunt like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 Okay. Try losing the beveling, the silver, and rotate it like 10 degrees. Will that make it look more serious and baseball-y?? ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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BJBerthiaume Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 The white definitely looks less cartoony and better. The jerseys look pretty good, but the outline on the home still makes it look a little cartoony. Maybe make it closer to the actual wordmark because it looks like it would have almost three quarters of an inch inbetween if it were on a real jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siegel0572 Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 This would be a great look for the Marlins to go to if they ever get to their new stadium. Nice job on all aspects of this concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anubis2051 Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 Nice work. Maybe try incorporating orange into the logo? It's been rumored that the marlins might go that way when they switch to the Miami affiliation. Just a thought. Overall great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 It is a great design but the wordmark is still not doing it for me. The marlin itself is spot on though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jagler Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 i definitely like the work you've done here, though i'd like to see a couple things...one, maybe a hat design using the 'M' with or without the fish, whatever looks better. also, as someone said, the teal is basically out with this team, definitely will be if/when they move into the new stadium and take the 'miami' name. so like he said, maybe some more orange in place of teal. and a little more black. down here we've definitely been lead to believe the teal will be all but invisible once the makeover takes place. they love the silver and black with orange as an accent. great stuff, though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgthree Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 Samson has said the team is going Black and Silver before it goes with more teal or orange. I think Orange might be fun, but a real option. I like the logo a lot and the Miami wordmark looks decent, the Marlins one is just too kiddish, I think it is the bubbly cursive is seen more in that logo. I think maybe just changing the L might do a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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