jrvegeeta Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 This is my first time posting logos here, but I do want honest inputs. My future post will probably have my company logo attached to it along with a presentation design.Jrvegeeta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckymack Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 As long as your company logo's for doing something other than logo design, you'll be just fine.Seriously, though? You need to completely scrap the idea for the New York Shields and start over from scratch. If you can't say anything nice...As far as the Challengers concept goes? it's got potential, I'll give it that. I'm not sold on the font, color scheme, gold stroke around everything in the shuttle logo, the shape of the blue 'shadow' in the other logos or the 'whoosh' effect in the third.Keep pluggin' away though, buddy. You'll get there. Sigs are for sissies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burmy Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 Good concepts...though I don't think the names are that good.1. "Shields" can't do a thing by themselves. Now if you were to call them the "Heroes," then that combo would be AWESOME!2. Isn't Challenger the shuttle that blew up? How about calling them the "Orlando Endeavours," as that's the newest and most successful space shuttle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 They are not horrible, but I don't like either one. I don't like the names for either team, and the font for the Orlando team along with the colors are not doing it for me at all. Keep working on it though. You could turn both of these around. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logocruncher Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 These are very clean and well presented, which is always a good thing. And I rather like the Challengers secondary (shuttle) logo. But the name "Shields" isn't doing it for me, even though I love that secondary logo. Keep working at it, and you'll get there. This is a great start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 I agree with the others. The names are not working for me. You may want to go back to the drawing board. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O_Town_Clown Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 Good concepts...though I don't think the names are that good.1. "Shields" can't do a thing by themselves. Now if you were to call them the "Heroes," then that combo would be AWESOME!2. Isn't Challenger the shuttle that blew up? How about calling them the "Orlando Endeavours," as that's the newest and most successful space shuttle.You hit it right on the head about the Challenger name. I grew up and still live in Central Florida and I promise you that people will not go for that name at all. People in my age group remember watching that launch from our classroom windows. You don't want a team named after a tragedy.Despite this, you have a good start here. Take some of the C&C and stick with it. Sig by TalktoChuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrvegeeta Posted February 28, 2009 Author Share Posted February 28, 2009 Thanks for being honest guys. I suspected that the names weren't all that good, but some people kept telling me that they were good names. When I asked why, they couldn't answer. I hate it when people sugar coat my designs which was the main reason I decided to post here. At least I can get an honest answer out of people here.Now that I know for sure that those names won't fly since reasons were given, they will be scraped.Again, thanks for the inputs. You guys helped me more than you realize. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrvegeeta Posted February 28, 2009 Author Share Posted February 28, 2009 Good concepts...though I don't think the names are that good.1. "Shields" can't do a thing by themselves. Now if you were to call them the "Heroes," then that combo would be AWESOME!2. Isn't Challenger the shuttle that blew up? How about calling them the "Orlando Endeavours," as that's the newest and most successful space shuttle.Hmm...you might be on to something there. I'll toss that around with some other friends in my field and see what they think (a few of them happen to be from Orlando). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EJ_Barlik Posted March 11, 2009 Share Posted March 11, 2009 Originally being from Florida, I personally have no beef with "Challengers", but perhaps for Orlando, the "Discovery" or "Discoverors" or "Enterprise" might work better if you want to use an "unusual" name. If you go with Enterprise, then you could kinda go futuristic later with some kinda Star Trek thing. Or you could even tweak the angle and make it look like Mouse ears, surely a nod to the biggest "enterprise" in Orlando, WDW.But the overall idea seems solid to start from....   5-time Defending NL East Champions  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted March 11, 2009 Share Posted March 11, 2009 i love the idea of Orlando Challengers. i think you need to come up with about 5 more logo concepts, then spend some more time on your favorite 2 or 3. the font works pretty well, so theres a good start. i live in Orlando now if it makes any difference . shuttle launch tonight! Â GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE Â / Â MEDIUMÂ / Â DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted March 12, 2009 Share Posted March 12, 2009 Originally being from Florida, I personally have no beef with "Challengers", but perhaps for Orlando, the "Discovery" or "Discoverors" or "Enterprise" might work better if you want to use an "unusual" name. If you go with Enterprise, then you could kinda go futuristic later with some kinda Star Trek thing. Or you could even tweak the angle and make it look like Mouse ears, surely a nod to the biggest "enterprise" in Orlando, WDW.But the overall idea seems solid to start from....And Enterprise was the "test Shuttle" was it not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EJ_Barlik Posted March 12, 2009 Share Posted March 12, 2009 And Enterprise was the "test Shuttle" was it not?To my knowledge, Enterprise was the name of the "mockup" shuttle they used for glide tests and landing tests, and then eventually retrofitted it to be a "full-use" shuttle. Seems to me, it only few a dozen missions or so....But, I think "Enterprise" not only ties in the shuttle program, and Star Trek, but also the spirit of WDW, which was the brainchild of an enterprise-ing man if ever there was one......Walt Disney.I think that's why I like the name so much.....but just my 2 cents.   5-time Defending NL East Champions  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted March 12, 2009 Share Posted March 12, 2009 And Enterprise was the "test Shuttle" was it not?To my knowledge, Enterprise was the name of the "mockup" shuttle they used for glide tests and landing tests, and then eventually retrofitted it to be a "full-use" shuttle. Seems to me, it only few a dozen missions or so....But, I think "Enterprise" not only ties in the shuttle program, and Star Trek, but also the spirit of WDW, which was the brainchild of an enterprise-ing man if ever there was one......Walt Disney.I think that's why I like the name so much.....but just my 2 cents. It was originally going to be retrofitted, but they changed the design up for Columbuia, and that would have involved taking apart the orbiter and rebuilding it. I love the name as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pastajoe Posted March 13, 2009 Share Posted March 13, 2009 The space shuttles are going to be retired soon, it would be better to have a logo that looks like the next generation of space vehicle. How about the Orlando Blast or Orlando Universe (get Universal Studios to sponsor).As for a police theme for other team, how about the New York Finest, or Protectors, or Blue Crew. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rams80 Posted March 13, 2009 Share Posted March 13, 2009 And Enterprise was the "test Shuttle" was it not?To my knowledge, Enterprise was the name of the "mockup" shuttle they used for glide tests and landing tests, and then eventually retrofitted it to be a "full-use" shuttle. Seems to me, it only few a dozen missions or so....But, I think "Enterprise" not only ties in the shuttle program, and Star Trek, but also the spirit of WDW, which was the brainchild of an enterprise-ing man if ever there was one......Walt Disney.I think that's why I like the name so much.....but just my 2 cents. It was originally going to be retrofitted, but they changed the design up for Columbuia, and that would have involved taking apart the orbiter and rebuilding it. I love the name as well.More specifically, they felt it would be cheaper to convert the test airframe they built into Challenger. Then, after that accident, it was determined to be cheaper to build Endeavour out of spares than refitting Enterprise.Orion also isn't set to go up for awhile yet IIRC. On 8/1/2010 at 4:01 PM, winters in buffalo said: You manage to balance agitation with just enough salient points to keep things interesting. Kind of a low-rent DG_Now. On 1/2/2011 at 9:07 PM, Sodboy13 said: Today, we are all otaku. "The city of Peoria was once the site of the largest distillery in the world and later became the site for mass production of penicillin. So it is safe to assume that present-day Peorians are descended from syphilitic boozehounds."-Stephen Colbert POTD: February 15, 2010, June 20, 2010 The Glorious Bloom State Penguins (NCFAF) 2014: 2-9, 2015: 7-5 (L Pineapple Bowl), 2016: 1-0 (NCFAB) 2014-15: 10-8, 2015-16: 14-5 (SMC Champs, L 1st Round February Frenzy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted March 13, 2009 Share Posted March 13, 2009 And Enterprise was the "test Shuttle" was it not?To my knowledge, Enterprise was the name of the "mockup" shuttle they used for glide tests and landing tests, and then eventually retrofitted it to be a "full-use" shuttle. Seems to me, it only few a dozen missions or so....But, I think "Enterprise" not only ties in the shuttle program, and Star Trek, but also the spirit of WDW, which was the brainchild of an enterprise-ing man if ever there was one......Walt Disney.I think that's why I like the name so much.....but just my 2 cents. It was originally going to be retrofitted, but they changed the design up for Columbuia, and that would have involved taking apart the orbiter and rebuilding it. I love the name as well.More specifically, they felt it would be cheaper to convert the test airframe they built into Challenger. Then, after that accident, it was determined to be cheaper to build Endeavour out of spares than refitting Enterprise.Orion also isn't set to go up for awhile yet IIRC.Yep it's been delayed until likee 2014 IIRC, but the engineers have proposed another plan to recycle some shuttle stuff and have something ready for 2012 IIRC, but the NASA Brass doesn't like the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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