StarsHockey Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 Kept it simple and clean. I need some work on the secondary still, but I like the primary.Tell me what needs work, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 It's way too generic. Not a good choice of font, but that is not the only issue. There is no life in it at all. Sorry to be so harsh but it is not a good concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshey Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 yeah it sucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
floydnimrod Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 I'll echo the above statement (two posts up). The font you used is also way too curvy for you to use that flying basketball to dot the "i." It could be improved if the font is a little more sharp/jagged. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 yeah it sucksThat is some great advice. I agree with Jay and FNZ, the font is way too generic. And also the curviness of the font doesn't fit the flying basketball. Try a new and this will look a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 yeah it sucksYour c+c sucks .There is a difference between "simple and clean", as you describe it, and "way too generic". It looks like you just came in with the idea of "I'm going to use the basketball logo to dot the i" and didn't think of the font used to accompany it. It looks bland and bubbly which contrasts greatly with the sleek modern look of the b-ball logo. For the secondary, if you are going to use a hoop, at least make it match the other part of the logo, I mean, make it flow, right now it looks like 2 separate elements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 I agree with elliott, this needs a lot of work. it, the font, it does not flow with the rest of the logo. it looks weird.The secondary logo, all you did was put a basketball hoop under the ball, try putting the ball through the net so it would go through it, and it would look better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scraw28 Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 looks a little to cartoonish to me, maybe a little bit more fierce would work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarsHockey Posted March 22, 2009 Author Share Posted March 22, 2009 looks a little to cartoonish to me, maybe a little bit more fierce would workI was sort of trying to get a Disney-ish type feel, but an update may be up later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 looks a little to cartoonish to me, maybe a little bit more fierce would workI was sort of trying to get a Disney-ish type feel, but an update may be up later.Use the disney font for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 yeah it sucksA man of many words ^^^ Anyway I think this has potential. I like the font, because it feels Florida-esque in a way (sort of tropical looking) but it fits with the Magic name in a way too. The biggest thing you need to work on is making the secondary logo mesh with the wordmark better. In order to do this, I think you are going to have to either make the wordmark more detailed and complex or simplify the secondary logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 looks a little to cartoonish to me, maybe a little bit more fierce would workI was sort of trying to get a Disney-ish type feel, but an update may be up later.Use the disney font for it. No, don't do that. This is a sports team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted March 23, 2009 Share Posted March 23, 2009 That was a joke, it would never work lol!Put a sorcerer looking figure dunking the basketball, that would be a better idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshey Posted March 26, 2009 Share Posted March 26, 2009 Yeah, I was being very straight forward. Its too curvy, childish/generic and soft looking. the hoop the present secondary logo is going into looks way too much like old clip art and the G in magic looks just like the C. maybe with some uniforms you can improve it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 26, 2009 Share Posted March 26, 2009 Put a sorcerer looking figure dunking the basketball, that would be a better idea.It's been done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted March 26, 2009 Share Posted March 26, 2009 try making the stars in the logo larger, or at least one of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted March 26, 2009 Share Posted March 26, 2009 Put a sorcerer looking figure dunking the basketball, that would be a better idea.It's been done.How about a warlock? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SenatorJake Posted March 26, 2009 Share Posted March 26, 2009 I like that font. (Dodges flying shoe)It's original. Good to think differently sometimes instead of always going with the same ol' tired (sport fonts) cliches.That basket on the secondary logo could use some work though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetsfan98 Posted April 3, 2009 Share Posted April 3, 2009 Put a sorcerer looking figure dunking the basketball, that would be a better idea.It's been done.Thats a layup Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jetsfan98 Posted April 3, 2009 Share Posted April 3, 2009 It's way too generic. Not a good choice of font, but that is not the only issue. There is no life in it at all. Sorry to be so harsh but it is not a good concept.In the words of Kanye West, how could you be so heartless?On the other hand, I could go on for hours about what could be better in this logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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