Sigma Kappa Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 Hey,I'm here again!...thank you for all the comments of my previous work guys-I really like to read your opinions......this is an older stuff I made for fictional team!The hockey team is called St.Louis Archers....so enjoy!Thank you for viewing gentlemen!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 Another good one, but I'm not sure the motion lines under the alternate logo work. It's well-rendered, but odd, I think. Also, I'm not too keen on the silver jersey. Otherwise, great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 LOVE the secondary. The only thing bugging me about the primary is the angle of the arrow. I think it should be parallel to the bottom/top side of the circle instead of at a greater angle. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spamspamspamspam Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 I really like the secondary, but if you ask me, I think you should have the entire bow, not just the lower half. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 Ha when I saw the title, I thought 'Archers' was going to refer to the Gateway Arch. But, I'm not too impressed by the primary logo. The secondary is awesome, but the primary is just kind of plain, and at the same time a little too abstract. The circle is tilted at a huge angle which distorts the A and makes it harder to recognize. Other than that, the secondary is awesome and so is the rest of the concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undead Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 Awesome work again! That secondary should be the primary. Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 Love the secondary; the way the archer and bow are framed gives a fantastic sense of tension. Great work. I'd be curious to see if it would look any better with a slightly smaller vertical component to the arrow's path; basically, would it look better if it were slightly more 'horizontal?' But very nice work on the logos.I'm not wild about the colors. They're both very desaturated and thus (to my eye) drab. I'd like to see some brighter or stronger colors. When you have two colors and they're both that desaturated, it looks flat.I'm also not a fan of the jerseys. You have two dynamic logos that both evoke speed and movement, but they seem slapped on a plain, basic jersey template with thick stripes. I think you really need more curves and angles and differences in line weight on the jerseys. And (dare I say) piping. I'm thinking about the thinness of the arrow, the bow, the string, and the 'motion trail' behind the arrow, and I think some well-used piping with other curved stripes would make a good jersey. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siegel0572 Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 Great work once again. I love the secondary logo. You should use it as the primary. I would also like to see that logo used on one of the sweater designs. I am looking foreward to seeing what is next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCap Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 I would switch the logos around. The native logo makes for a much better primary, and the "A" works much better as the alternate. PotD 26/2/12 1/7/15 2020 BASS Spin the Wheel, Make the Deal Regular Season Champion 2021 BASS NFL Pick'em Regular Season Champion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gothamite Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 I really like the designs, but I think there's something backwards about them. In the primary, the arrow is pointing down, and in the secondary, the energy flows from right to left, going against the direction we read.Flip the direction of the arrow in the primary and reflect the entire secondary, and I think you've got a winner. The Green Bay Packers Uniform Database! Now in a handy blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 I would say that the secondary mark is stronger and should be the primary. it's absolutely gorgeous. the primary makes a great secondary, and, while well rendered, doesn't make me want to write home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_RH_ Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 As usual, this looks awesome. Here's an idea for the secondary logo: (which I also like a lot more than your primary) why don't you try flipping the background shape upside down and play around with the top to create a mimic of the St. Louis arch? I think that would be subtle enough to notice but not take anything away from the archer and his bow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karby65 Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 OK concept, but what's the point when there's already a hockey team here??? Could you make this into a soccer concept? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 OK concept, but what's the point when there's already a hockey team here??? Could you make this into a soccer concept?I certainly hope you're not being serious. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcameronh Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 Great concept. IMO, I would use the secondary logo on the alt jersey and maybe try to make the A in the primary look at little more like the Gateway Arch to incorperate that as an alternate meaning to the name Archers. Other then that i wouldn't change anything else. Overall, nice work. Very clean and simple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dmontelpare Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 i believe this was in the Icethetics IceHL or the other one i maybe wrong and i remember thinking this logo was awesome great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 Yet another great one. That secondary is beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrySmalls Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 I like it but what gets lost in the logos is the feather distortion on the back of the arrows on the primary and secondary logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Kappa Posted March 24, 2009 Author Share Posted March 24, 2009 Another good one, but I'm not sure the motion lines under the alternate logo work. It's well-rendered, but odd, I think. Also, I'm not too keen on the silver jersey. Otherwise, great work. Ooops,it really looks like I put motion lines there... I'm sorry...it meant to be fringes (trims) on that clothing they used to wear,if you know what I mean...thanks for notifying,anyway! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 Perfect idea for St. Louis. People know that city by its arch, but this is a cool way to look at it. I'd switch the primary and the secondary around because the primary looks like a secondary and the secondary looks like a primary. Also for your primary, I'd make the arrow point up...somebody else can explain why things should not point down... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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