slapshot Posted April 15, 2009 Author Share Posted April 15, 2009 I cant say Im a fan of the Jays set. Their road uniform is perfect in my opinion and I think building off of that, as jayjackson said, would be the way to go.The blue alternate isnt that good to be honest, the wordmark has no pop on the blue jersey.Id love to see the Jays come out with a blue hat, but the black one is growing on me.For your concepts thus far:Red Sox: A+Yankees: A+Jays: C+You made the right move with more blue, but the jerseys arent working for me.I tried it with solid lettering (no bevels), but it didn't look right, due to the multiple outlines on the letters. The jay looked odd in the lighter blue, and with the lettering the same color as the jay, there was no separation between the two. They have to be different colors in order to work, at least the way I used them.The beveling is also a connection to the inline lettering the team used in the past. Not the same style, but it's still somewhat related.The current number font (Agency) wouldn't work here because none of the scripts are in that font.I actually like the previous inlined version better, but I like the current blue jay. It would take some considerable work to combine the two styles. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted April 15, 2009 Author Share Posted April 15, 2009 changes made, hopefully correct file will overwrite one in the system Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nynewkid Posted April 15, 2009 Share Posted April 15, 2009 Does the BP stand for batting practice? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted April 15, 2009 Share Posted April 15, 2009 Does the BP stand for batting practice?Yes. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted April 20, 2009 Author Share Posted April 20, 2009 Update with a second Blue Jays variation, combining a modified version of the current logo and color scheme with the previous inline script...notes:2 blues/1 black color schemeJay head modified to include a T-shape in the feathers (for Toronto)inline font for numbers and script, basic MLB block for name lettering Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sacker12 Posted April 20, 2009 Share Posted April 20, 2009 New York Yankees:Other than having the numbers too big on the home jerseys, this set is perfect. I especially like the road jersey. Dodger Block looks so much better on that set than the current Full Block. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted April 20, 2009 Share Posted April 20, 2009 I like the direction this is headed, but the thing on Blue Jay is sort of abstract. What exactly is it supposed to be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitz Posted April 20, 2009 Share Posted April 20, 2009 Update with a second Blue Jays variation, combining a modified version of the current logo and color scheme with the previous inline script...notes:2 blues/1 black color schemeJay head modified to include a T-shape in the feathers (for Toronto)inline font for numbers and script, basic MLB block for name letteringYeah.... About the feathers, Kinda makes the Blue Jay look like a Marconi Penguin... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted April 21, 2009 Author Share Posted April 21, 2009 update with Tampa (pretty much same as previous version)notes:changed color from navy to original dark green color for unique color schemeused number font similar to font of scripts Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HotCoffey Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 idk what that thing on the blue jay's head is, but i LIKE it! "That ball has a hit in it, so I want it to get back in the ball bag and goof around with the other balls in there. Maybe it'll learn some sense and come out as a pop-up next time," Mark "The Bird" Fidrych Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted April 21, 2009 Author Share Posted April 21, 2009 The "thing" on the Blue Jay's head is just a stylized feather.And to complete the AL East, Baltimorenotes (I don't have the new Baltimore script)used late-60s era vestsarched single-color names on backcreated new shoulder patch using retro Orioles logo and Maryland flagreturned stripes to stirrupsadded collar striping to mimic sleeve cuff striping Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 The vests look great for the O's. Also love the addition of the retro bird logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 I'm not too keen on sleeveless for the Orioles, maybe because I'm so accustomed to seeing them in regular jerseys. I do realize that they're a slight nod to the past, so kudos there.I'm also liking the alternate sleeve patch, but it might look even better should you have the oriole's head flow with the flag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 The O's concept is perfection as far as I am concerned. I would love to see the Orioles take the field in these beauties. Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted April 21, 2009 Author Share Posted April 21, 2009 NL East, New York Metsnotes:I was never bothered by the addition of black, but tried to minimize its use to drop shadows/trimadded blue alternate (instead of black)used NY logo for road BP uniform Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 The names/numbers and the wordmarks are both too big. Other than that, I can dig it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camden Crazy Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 Pet peeve spotted in that you didn't use the O's new Baltimore script, and I have yet to see a concept that does. This creates a lack of consistency. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted April 21, 2009 Author Share Posted April 21, 2009 Pet peeve spotted in that you didn't use the O's new Baltimore script, and I have yet to see a concept that does. This creates a lack of consistency.notes (I don't have the new Baltimore script)Thanks for reading Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GuitarPunk2512 Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 NL East, New York Metsnotes:I was never bothered by the addition of black, but tried to minimize its use to drop shadows/trimadded blue alternate (instead of black)used NY logo for road BP uniformperfect, other then the black birm on the road hat, either make that all blue or an orange birm. id definelty buy those BP hats if they dont the stupid ear flaps. i love that blue alt too, so much better then the black. i would like to actually see a authentic on field hat thats blue with orange birm, it would be cool the see that and i think it would pop out there. Mets, Jets, Islanders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 I remember when the rangers tried a blue cap with a black bill. I never really liked it then or now. I prefer the all-blue cap. Everything else looks good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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