Spammy Posted May 1, 2009 Share Posted May 1, 2009 Hey guys Im back and i tried my luck at a baseball concept and to start out here are the Fla. Marlins...Home: Away:Alt: C+C plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crkraider22 Posted May 1, 2009 Share Posted May 1, 2009 The numbers on the back are big, there would be no way to fit two numbers on the back at that size. There is a stray line on the left side of the cap, at least on the home one. Finally, the other stray line under the back of the jersey. On to the concept itself, maybe try something other than the piping provided on the template. Also, with the alternate, the black pants just create a black overrkill with the entire set. Black is a widely used color in the league, so maybe take advantage of the Marlins having teal and create the alternate using that. I'm assuming that the alternate would be used for both home and away games, therefore I think the Marlins workmark would be more fitting, unless you were planning on having a home and away alternate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted May 1, 2009 Share Posted May 1, 2009 a blackout in baseball? and out of all places in florda? really? THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vmd9 Posted May 1, 2009 Share Posted May 1, 2009 I would say have a both a black and teal alternate, but probably stay away from black pants. Keep black socks with the black jersey and maybe teal with the teal??? Also maybe lose the teal brim on one of the alternate caps and use the "m" logo, probably would look better with the black jersey. It would create more variety...just suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted May 1, 2009 Share Posted May 1, 2009 Where's the back number? Can you make it a little bigger so that it's actually noticeable?In all honesty, doesn't seem like you did too much, other than change the bill color and swap out pinstripes with piping. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted May 1, 2009 Share Posted May 1, 2009 Ah, the latest graduate of the PSGD (Patsox School of Graphic Design). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted May 1, 2009 Share Posted May 1, 2009 a blackout in baseball? and out of all places in florda? really?the now-defunt all black uniform of the Jax Jaguars frowns at this comment... and is frowning even more at the new Jaguar unis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vmd9 Posted May 1, 2009 Share Posted May 1, 2009 Ah, the latest graduate of the PSGD (Patsox School of Graphic Design).HAHA still my all-time favorite quote on this board "I'd like to see a perfect concept. If you are attempting to make anything but a perfect concept, then you are in fact being lazy IMO."but see if this was a patsox concept it would just be a home jesery, no pants, socks or hats...thats how he works and you can actually argue that this is better. Remember his marlin's concept hahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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