vicfurth Posted May 21, 2009 Share Posted May 21, 2009 I wanted to do a new project for a couple reasons. For starters, I needed a break from college baseball (whether I pick that back up remains to be seen). Also, I wanted to test out my tweaked presentation for E-Licious Designs, my new design firm. Since I wanted to start a new project, I wanted something that hadn't been done in a while (or at all, to my memory). So, I went with Arena Football. Nobody's really thinking about it since they took a year off. Think about it... What better time for a league-wide re-design than now?So, with all that in mind, my first entry into this project is the Arizona Rattlers, league champions in '94 and '97...With a name like "Rattlers", you automatically think snake motif, so I put some snake-patterns on the cuffs, helmet stripe, and pants. At the same time, I didn't want to overkill with snake diamonds. Another thing that bugs me is that the Rattlers vastly under-use their own colors (hear me out). They have teal, desert gold, and black as their colors, but they use mostly black--a la, Jacksonville Jaguars. What I tried to do was have black take a back seat to the teal and gold, using black only as an accent or alternate jersey. I didn't go too out there for this one, since they're one of the more successful teams in the league. I did add some piping, though, because without it, the design looked a bit empty.I'd love some C/C on these. These are my first football concepts in Inkscape. The only thing I probably won't do is logos for now since I don't feel I've become good enough in Inkscape to make new logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted May 21, 2009 Share Posted May 21, 2009 This is a really neat idea for a new project. The AFL is perfect to re-design because they are a somewhat modern league uniform-wise. As for this concept, I could kinda see the snake pattern comin' but it looks pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMU Posted May 21, 2009 Share Posted May 21, 2009 Nice done incorporating all the colors. Only thing I really can suggest would be to outline the player name on the home in black rather than white.You might try adding sponsor patches just to see how they look and to achieve the true arena league look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentz Posted May 22, 2009 Share Posted May 22, 2009 Looks good, the piping doesn't really match the pant stripes, however. I love the colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted May 22, 2009 Share Posted May 22, 2009 Yeah, the piping should probably continue onto the pants. Overall, I really like the idea of this series. I hope to see more of it. I realize you aren't doing logos, but I wish I could see the R modernized. If you try drawing it out and scanning it in, it's easier to learn. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy B Posted May 22, 2009 Share Posted May 22, 2009 I like what you did with the Rattlers (I did a concept with the same pattern on the pants and jerseys a few years ago, you pulled it off better.) I think it would look better without the piping, the Rattlers are one of the teams in the AFL with a "classic" look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted May 22, 2009 Share Posted May 22, 2009 Well done, looking forward to more. How about my Storm next? GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted May 24, 2009 Share Posted May 24, 2009 Wow, that looks great. Nice job. I really like what you did with the teal. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted May 27, 2009 Author Share Posted May 27, 2009 Yay, I got comments! Onto the next team, the Georgia Force. I'm kinda going back and forth on whether I want to do the defunct teams as well. Thoughts?As for the Force, I wanted the chance to work with a color scheme that's actually (in my opinion) kinda hard to pull off: Black and blue. At the same time, Georgia's scheme is classic and bruising, perfect for football. While I like their current duds, black and blue can be a bit better utilized, I think. I also used their current lightning scheme, here seen on the yokes, a bit more, going with something more like the Denver Broncos. This time I decided against an alternate because I didn't want to do yet another black jersey.I switched up the helmet because I felt using their entire primary logo was a bit crowded, so I went with just the "GF" logo. For the striping, I mixed up two NFL styles - Carolina and San Diego - which I really liked.Not sure who's next, maybe the Storm. I might try a defunct team, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 I like these a lot. The lightning bolts are well executed and it looks really nice IMO. I noticed the helmet stripes, too; that is a clever idea. I'm looking forward to more in this series, keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 The Force concept is very well executed. Good job using restraint. I especially think the GF logo and helmets are huge improvements. Love the tapering lightning bolts on the helmets. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YELDARBfield Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 I'm loving this series thus far. Now here are my thoughts:ARZ: I love the use of all of their colors. However, I do think that black is under-used on the away. Maybe make the cuff pattern black and gold instead of teal and gold? Those two seem to wash each other out anyway. Also, NOB's should be only one color, I think. I can barely make out "BONNER" on the away, and the others are nearly impossible to read.GEO: I love the simplification of the helmet logo and the switch to blue. Not sure how I feel about the helmet striping though. And I love the new Bronco-esque design, but it does inhibit the use of anything non-monochrome.Nice job so far. Cannot wait to see the other teams (plus the Kats? Maybe?). Twitter • Facebook • Instagram • LinkedIn • Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 Great job with the Force. Everything lloks great. I like the striping you used. This is a very clean, well-done concpet. The only thing I would consider is a black alternate. Looking forward to the next team! https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatorade09 Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 I would buy one of those force jerseys, very well executed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speedy Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 Those Force jerseys are great. After seeing those, I'm mildly shocked those weren't used in the 90's for the Chargers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted May 27, 2009 Share Posted May 27, 2009 Well done on the Force. My only suggestion is on the series as a whole. Wait on the defunct teams. A series is a daunting task, and a complete series is great to show off. I would do the current teams, then see if you want to include the defunct teams. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted May 28, 2009 Author Share Posted May 28, 2009 Well done on the Force. My only suggestion is on the series as a whole. Wait on the defunct teams. A series is a daunting task, and a complete series is great to show off. I would do the current teams, then see if you want to include the defunct teams.Haha, believe me, I know. That NCAA project made it all the way to 69 (not including the designs I tried and scrapped) before I decided to rest from it. Thanks for the tip, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy B Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 When I opened this, I wanted to see you keep the lightning bolt pattern and execute it differently. You did exactly that, and it came out great. There aren't any big changes I would make to this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siegel0572 Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 Both of these concepts are very strong. The only change I would suggest for the Rattlers is putting black around the players names on the teal jersey, they are a little difficult to see. I absolutley love the Force set. The lightning bolts are very well designed and used nicely on the helmets and the uniform. I look foreward to seeing what is to come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted May 28, 2009 Author Share Posted May 28, 2009 Next on the list (which is whatever I feel like doing, lol) is the Tampa Bay Storm. Their current uniforms actually remind me a bit of the Pittsburgh Panthers with the blue and gold. However, I found that Tampa's shades of navy and gold are a bit washed out--either that, or the stuff on the "mother site" isn't quite saturated enough. No matter, though. The name of this next concept is simple, simple, simple. The Storm is one of the original four ArenaFL franchises, and I thought a simplistic, tasteful design would suit them well. Again, I went only home and away and only gold pants this time around. The helmet is basically unchanged, save for the facemask, which I changed from gray to blue. I also took the script away and put only the swirling storm logo on the helmet. Other than that, it was a matter of helping all the striping patterns to match, and voila! Tampa Bay Storm concept... Oh, yeah, the player is Andre Bowden, one of the top rushers in Arena history. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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