Marleau Wallpaper

[XxBMW85xX]

Sorry if this isnt the section for something like this, im new here and I dont know what goes where.

This is not my first wallpaper but i havent made alot before this one, and I got alot of good tips on my NHL 10 Cover thread, so I wanted to see what you guys think of this

http://i631.photobucket.com/albums/uu39/xx...auWallpaper.jpg

[gingerbreadmann]

Make the text more snazzy and creative. It should be bolder too, and much larger. I would take it out of the stripe too. You know, just pump some life into it like the rest of the wall. Other than that, add a bit more color (feels really monotonous) and I would say it's pretty darn good.

[Bmac]

I like it. Very cool. Nice effects. And of course,

[XxBMW85xX]

thanks, and by the way here is a Nabby Wall i just made

http://i631.photobucket.com/albums/uu39/xx...ovWallpaper.jpg

[Cola]

both of them look great but suffer the same fate- the text isn't at it's best in either. in the first, it is very small, thin, and hard to read. in the second, the size is fine- but it almost blends in too much to where it isn't greatly noticeable.

[XxBMW85xX]

ill take that as a compliment

I dont like wallpapers that have huge glows around them and are like "THIS IS EVGENI NABOKOV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Me and most Sharks fans that would use this are well aware of who it is and to me the fine almost hidden look is great