Bmac Posted August 10, 2009 Author Share Posted August 10, 2009 How does this reflect a panther scratch? Have you ever seen a cat scratch? Don't claim a design motif has a specific purpose if it doesn't, that's very patsox. The jersey doesn't look bad, but the hem template is a little weird and the yellow piping would look better if it were thicker. I would prefer a more straight edged template here that looks more like the pre edge template, just with the same striping scheme seen here. Or come up with a new hem design and reverse the stripes on the arms so it curves the opposite direction and fits together more cohesively at the top where the back and front meet.Well, I guess my scratch effect didn't trun out with this design. I would take this template design further, but I want the scratch idea to work. So I'm going back to the drawing board with a new template for the Panthers. Stay tuned! https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted August 10, 2009 Author Share Posted August 10, 2009 Time for a Panthers update! This one turned out much better. The idea was to use a panther claw scratch design without over-doing it, combining it with a clean look. I believe with this new design, that is exactly what I have done. On the sleeves of the jersey are scratch designs. The striping pattern on the end of the sleeves reflects the scratch design. The design at the hem of the jersey is supposed to keep the whole jersey classic, combining it with the new scratch design. The "panther breaking hockey stick" logo is on the chest. C+C is much appreciated. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted August 11, 2009 Share Posted August 11, 2009 I would make the scratches thicker along with a thicker outline. Right now they're too thin IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted August 11, 2009 Share Posted August 11, 2009 1. I'm sorry, those don't look like scratches at all. Some things you just can't really do abstractly. This ends up looking like those arced pulse things coming out of the CBS sports logo. Google images will help, as well as a Hartford Wolf Pack alternate which is easily viewable right now on icethetics. Two other images that will help are Roger Clementes panthers concept, which inspired me to do my own concept with slash marks, I won't like to it b/c I'd feel like a d-bag.2. Don't c+c your concepts before you even post them, saying they are nice or better or whatever just digs you a hole because this last update happens to be worse. C+c is our job. P.s. Those end of the arm stripes wouldn't be visible with hockey gloves on. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted August 11, 2009 Author Share Posted August 11, 2009 Update to the scratches. They are thicker at the top to make it reflect a scratch more. Better? https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted August 11, 2009 Author Share Posted August 11, 2009 While I let the Panthers update sit, I'm gonna post two new concepts. I am posting 2 at this time for a reason: they are just modified from the current 3rds. These two teams have 3rd jerseys already, but I think they could both be a little better. The first is the Sabres. The jersey the Sabres released last year is good, but not perfect. So I eliminated some of the original design elements and added shoulder patches. I also darkened the blue slightly. The second team is the Black Hawks. Last year, the Hawks wore a black version of the home and road jersey. This year, they are reportedly wearing the Winter Classic jerseys from last season as their 3rds. IMO, both jerseys are nice, but neither is perfect. With my new concept, I combined the two. The regular striping pattern is used, but a circle logo is on the chest. It is not the same logo from the Winter Classic jerseys. I made a new logo for the Black Hawks. It combines the old style logo with current elements. Here it is.C+C. I don't expect too many comments on these two, as they aren't very original, but I wanted to get them out there. I still want some feedback on the Panthers set before I move on to the next team. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted August 12, 2009 Author Share Posted August 12, 2009 As I said before, I didn't expect the last two teams to get any comments. So, moving on. This is one that I have been wanting to release for a while. I began work on this concept weeks ago, finally finishing the template this past week. The team: the Avalanche. When I first came up with the design, the idea was to have it look like snow on the end of the jersey. That would be the white parts of the sleeves and the hem. I also wanted to combine a classic look with a modern design, thus the diagonal Colorado script is used. C+C as always! https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted August 12, 2009 Share Posted August 12, 2009 so its their old design without the black...Im sure you have seen their old third, its the same thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted August 12, 2009 Author Share Posted August 12, 2009 so its their old design without the black...Im sure you have seen their old third, its the same thing.The only thing the same from the old jersey is the main color and the logo. It is a complately new design. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted August 12, 2009 Share Posted August 12, 2009 so its their old design without the black...Im sure you have seen their old third, its the same thing.The only thing the same from the old jersey is the main color and the logo. It is a complately new design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted August 12, 2009 Author Share Posted August 12, 2009 so its their old design without the black...Im sure you have seen their old third, its the same thing.The only thing the same from the old jersey is the main color and the logo. It is a complately new design.Exactly, completely new design. The only things the same are that it is maroon, it has the Colorado script, it has a tie-up collar, and the numbers are the same. The design is completely different. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RIPmetrodome Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 the colorado script is a complete rip-off of the rangers, which is why most people didnt like it. i think you should think of a completely brand-new third for da avs, b/c the one you have now is much too similar to a jersey most people didnt enjoy. H.H.H. Metrodome - The greatest dome in the history of Minneapolis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 Diagonal lettering doesn't make it a complete rip-off. That said, I do agree that I would rather see a logo on there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 It does look the same as the original 3rd but the stripes are different. It would be interseting to see the Avs use the Bigfoot on a 3rd jersey. Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 the colorado script is a complete rip-off of the rangers, which is why most people didnt like it. i think you should think of a completely brand-new third for da avs, b/c the one you have now is much too similar to a jersey most people didnt enjoy.You want people to take you seriously, yet you type like that?Anyway, bmac, I'm really enjoying your series so far. I'm really liking the Sabres and Avs jerseys especially. Your Blackhawks jersey is also very similar to one that I'll be unveiling in my redesign. Keep up the good work, buddy. On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc? Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted August 13, 2009 Author Share Posted August 13, 2009 With the recent news about the Avs new 3rd jersey, I don't want to change the diagonal script I used. But, thanks to some feedback, I will have two different options for the Avs. One will be the original I posted, the other will be with the alternte logo. Which is better? https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 Diagonal script. Hands down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_RH_ Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 Yeah, the foot is a cool logo but shouldn't be on the front of the jersey. I like your template, the removal of black is nice on the jersey (although you kept it on the number font). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zmspartans Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 Ya id stick with the diagonal one too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted August 16, 2009 Author Share Posted August 16, 2009 3 votes for the Big Foot logo, 3 votes for the diagonal script. Can I get a few more votes/comments so I can have a final jersey for the Avs? Thanks. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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