Limerick Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 I like the jerseys for the Allen Americans. I think the colour scheme is just right. Amarillo on the hand is a different story. I do like the logo, that should stay the same, but I am not sure if orange and grey is the right scheme. What about changing the orange to navy blue? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted July 26, 2009 Author Share Posted July 26, 2009 Here are 2 mock-ups with different color schemes. Feedback away. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limerick Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 My vote is for the second one. The colour scheme works much better than the orange. Nice work, I look forward to the next team.Limerick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gary Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 To tell the truth, neither, you need to find 2 colors that will compliment eachother and frankly both are very hard to see. Try Silver, Black and White for the Gorillas. Better than orange and Purple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 To tell the truth, neither, you need to find 2 colors that will compliment eachother and frankly both are very hard to see. Try Silver, Black and White for the Gorillas. Better than orange and PurpleOr atleast have one considerably lighter than the other. I like the bottom one Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted July 26, 2009 Author Share Posted July 26, 2009 OK, would you guys rather see the blue/black/grey/green, or silver/black/white? dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limerick Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 My vote is for the blue/black/grey/green Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lets_go_red Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 I really like the Americans, the thirds are like the Blackhawks 75th anniversary jerseys- a set that makes me j in my p. Don't be afraid to use white in the Gorillas dark concept. I'd say Navy, Kelly/lighter Green, Black, Silver, and White would make the most sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted July 27, 2009 Author Share Posted July 27, 2009 I would do something like that, but a 5 color color scheme would be to difficult to have a very consistent striping system. I know some of you won't like this at all, but I am going to go with Navy, Green, Gray, and Black. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 I think having some white in there would make a world of difference. I prefer the color scheme of the bottom one better. righ now the numbers and letters go -from inside out- gray to blue to black to blue. I would try gray to WHITE top black to blue or something like that. then some white on the striping. I personally think white is the most underrated color in all logos and jerseys and that they make everything stand out more DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted July 27, 2009 Author Share Posted July 27, 2009 OK, here is an update. I just read Jaha's post, so any advice on how i could work white in to the logos and jerseys would help. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 On the secondary you could try making the word 'gorillas' white... the home and alt. jerseys still have no white so just anything white or birghter color to separate all the dark colors you have is all you need.also im not a huge fan of the triple dark outlined gorilla head now that i look at it again. i think youcoult try getting rid of either the black or navy blue. if you get rid of black you could make the current black shading on the gorilla the navy. that might work. idk DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 The home has to include white, the gray color doesn't work well at all for the numbers or gorilla head for that matter. They're just too close in hue to be told apart very well. Also, I'm not a fan of the triple stripe on the jersey or like jaha said, it's not necessary on the logo either. The jerseys would look alright if it was just one stripe. All you need to do is simplify them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted July 29, 2009 Author Share Posted July 29, 2009 OK, I hope for this to be the last or close to last update before I move on to the Sundogs. Main thing is the fact I included much more white. C and C.Also, the logos are presented on a blue back because it best shows all the logos, so think nothing of that.I noticed that they look quite pixelated, and I've exported them the same way I've always exported them, and I havent had a trouble. Help? dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted August 1, 2009 Author Share Posted August 1, 2009 OK, well I'd love to hear your ideas, but I think I am good for the Gorillas, I might make a couple tweaks, but for the most part I'm finished. So, now, I'm moving onto the third team, the Arizona Sundogs. For the logos, I kept their current primary, as their is something that I quite like about it. For the secondary, I made a howling coyote logo, inspired by dgnmrwrw's Predators secondary logo. I contacted him, and he is fine with me posting it. The rays in the background might be a bit much, but we'll see. I tried playing with the numbers of rays, and weights and stuff, but nothing looked any better than what I had. For the jerseys, I based them mainly off of their current jerseys, and the alt. is just kinda an idea. So enjoy, and hopefully some people will give c and c. I dont care if it's completely ripping the design, as long as people comment so I can improve. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 1, 2009 Share Posted August 1, 2009 The jerseys in this series are a bit too busy. Tone it down a bit. As far as the logos go, the howling coyote logo you made is the best logo that I've seen from you. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted August 1, 2009 Share Posted August 1, 2009 Coyote logo is solid, but it could go without the rays. When do you ever see a silhouetted animal and cliff with a huge sunburst behind it? When I see that I'd think of night time, not a sunny day. Good work nonetheless. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted August 1, 2009 Author Share Posted August 1, 2009 The jerseys in this series are a bit too busy. Tone it down a bit. As far as the logos go, the howling coyote logo you made is the best logo that I've seen from you.Yeah, they are kinda busy, but I wasn't quite sure what to do with the striping because of the 4 color color scheme. Thanks for the comment on the logo. Any ideas about striping?Coyote logo is solid, but it could go without the rays. When do you ever see a silhouetted animal and cliff with a huge sunburst behind it? When I see that I'd think of night time, not a sunny day. Good work nonetheless.Yeah, I was thinking about that when I put the rays in, as if their is bright sunny rays in the back, there won't be a silhouette. But I thought it tied in with the fact their in Arizona, and their called the "Sun"dogs. Should I drop the rays, or keep them? dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 1, 2009 Share Posted August 1, 2009 Keep the rays on the logo. As for the striping, not every color needs to be in every stripe. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentz Posted August 1, 2009 Share Posted August 1, 2009 Try flipping grey for yellow in the alt logo, I think a red-yellow-red pattern would look better than red-grey-red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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