Spammy Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Hey all i have been making a cycling template for awhile now and i think i got it. here iis a picture of it in actionHere is the linkCycling template!EDIT. Helmet now released!! here it is in actionLink here. Cycling Helmet!EDIT. Shorts Coming soon!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 New Cycling Template@@@@!, woooooh!@@@@1: )Why?Completely makes this decent concept suck. THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 New Cycling Template@@@@!, woooooh!@@@@1: )Why?Completely makes this decent concept suck.facepalm GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spammy Posted July 25, 2009 Author Share Posted July 25, 2009 Can i please just get some c+c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crkraider22 Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Can i please just get some c+cThe helmet looks like a rock spraypainted with American colors. How are the templates "in action" if they are flat? To me that would mean they are on a person. Also, it might help to cut out the childish antics you put in your post titles and previews if you want some true C&C and recognization on the boards, I'm pretty sure you have been told this before but it needs to be said again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Can i please just get some c+cNO! GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crkraider22 Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Can i please just get some c+cNO!Did it take you longer to think of what to type or to actually type it?Dude chill out. I mean you are coming across as a real dick lately. First you rant about your MILF logo, now this. I think that Spammy has gotten better with his work now that he is creating his own not stealing stuff. Just cause he did that in the past doesn't mean you gotta be this way with him. At least he is trying to help the boards out by creating a template that there are few of here. Granted they need some work, but still cut him some slack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Can i please just get some c+cNO!Did it take you longer to think of what to type or to actually type it?Dude chill out. I mean you are coming across as a real dick lately. First you rant about your MILF logo, now this. I think that Spammy has gotten better with his work now that he is creating his own not stealing stuff. Just cause he did that in the past doesn't mean you gotta be this way with him. At least he is trying to help the boards out by creating a template that there are few of here. Granted they need some work, but still cut him some slack.Sorry the no wasn't really angry just sort of a joke. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Can i please just get some c+cThe template itself isn't horrible, it's just what you did with it that makes it look bad. The gradient doesn't work and the C logo looks extremely sloppy as does the "CCSLC" at the bottom. The helmet needs some work, because right now you can't really tell what it is. One last thing: the collar is crooked and sloppy as well. Like I said, it's better than some of your past stuff, but still needs a lot of work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 New Cycling Template@@@@!, woooooh!@@@@1: )Yep spammy, you are getting much more mature. facepalmCan i please just get some c+cChuck never lets c+c get in the way of a one-word post pad.Ok, here is my c+c. The helmet needs some major work. The gradient doesn't make it look realistic and the edges are very choppy. You have the right idea with the jersey but it has some very basic flaws. Here, the gradient actually does work, because cycling jerseys use a lot of gradients. Now, the shape is good, but I have no idea why some of the edges are choppy and the two sides are asymetrical. Don't you use the flip and smooth tools? For some reason there is black striping on the front on the collar and the arm. If it's supposed to be the "holes", it doesn't look like it. Finally, you have issues with the back pockets, once again it is very uneven, look at the center pocket. And, you might not know this, but on cycling jerseys, wording generally goes on the pocket itself and does not go across the back. What I mean is there should be three images isolated to each pocket, not one image across all of them. Yeah, so in conclusion, just take your time and think about what you are doing, that way it won't have so many basic problems. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Very sloppy. Look at the back; you can see where all the lines don't meet up, where they overhang the object underneath, or how curves aren't curved. Take some time to get everything lined up, points joined where they're supposed to be, no double lines or overhangs. If you're going to make a template it needs to be well put together and useable. It would take more time to clean up the lines before someone wanted to use the template than it would to create a design on it.The helmet needs help too. Like crk said, it looks like a rock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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