JamesCraven Posted April 22, 2004 Share Posted April 22, 2004 "FYI, the Bengals' 'B' is on the helmet." I am only making mere suggestions, that is all. The new "B" should be in a more promiment position on the sweater/jersey, like on the shoulders. The full jumping Bengal should be on the helmet.BTW, how about the old throwback "Kicking Colt" in the proposed Colts hockey sweater/jersey with the Maple Leafs' uniform pattern? Would that be a good idea? "I better go take a long walk off a short pier or something."Some people on this bolard have told me to do just that.My "Ron Mexico" alias is "Jon Tobago". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted April 22, 2004 Share Posted April 22, 2004 Noooooo..... the "new B" (not to be confused with the newbie) should be flushed!As far as the colt suggestion... that would make a great 3rd! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted April 22, 2004 Author Share Posted April 22, 2004 I'm workin' on the Jags now. I've finished the Titans. I did the Titans in a very similar fashion as the one ICS did. I want to apologize now for that. I just could not get it to look good any other way.As for the "B" logo on the Bengals...I was very happy to see the tiger head and not the B on the Bengals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted April 24, 2004 Author Share Posted April 24, 2004 PHEW! First addition in a week... The AFC South:Houston TexansIndianapolis ColtsJacksonville JaguarsTennessee TitansThese concepts feature something new (which I will eventually add to everything I've done) which is a watermark superimposed onto my concept to protect against theft.Note: All other concepts in this project can be seen here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted April 24, 2004 Share Posted April 24, 2004 These concepts feature something new (which I will eventually add to everything I've done) which is a watermark superimposed onto my concept to protect against theft. I'm all for theft-protection, but it's not like anyone's going to steal a design of a logo that's already out there, and a jersey design that probably won't get used.It makes it very difficult to view the concept.I'd recommend going with a simple copyright on your original work, and on stuff like this, I don't think anything is necessary.The Starry-Eyes' one is simple and nice. Some consistency required in the striping though.The Lucky Charms' one is very plain. The Sharks' thrid is not a jersey cut I'd copy for anything.The Teal-Tongued Cats angular trim is a little too sharply angled. A little bit is okay, but when it starts to interfere with the numbers and invade on the logos personal space, it's a little too much.The Flaming Thumbtacks also require some consistency in the striping.All in all, not your best division, but there's certainly some very nice work there. My favourite is Houston's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted April 24, 2004 Share Posted April 24, 2004 I would have liked to see the shoulder and main Titans logos swapped. The off-center T just looks weird to me.For the Colts, I am just not feeling the arm striping. It doesn't feel traditional enough.I like the other 2 quite a bit.As for the watermark, I dislike it very much. I think it is too dark, and it really detracts from some nice work. I found myself, at times, trying to distinguis between what was a stripe and what was just the watermark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NJTank Posted April 25, 2004 Share Posted April 25, 2004 They are not bad. The Colts one is knd of plain, but the other look good especially the Texans which is the best of the 6. The Jags is kinda differnt but it works.While the Titans are very good too. www.sportsecyclopedia.com For the best in sports history go to the Sports E-Cyclopedia at http://www.sportsecyclopedia.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesCraven Posted April 25, 2004 Share Posted April 25, 2004 Yeah, for the Colts, I would have preferred the '74-75 Seals striping. I also would have used a old-school kicking Colt in the sweater fronts and the horseshoe on the shoulders.But the Jags, did we have to see the pre-1999 Blues? "I better go take a long walk off a short pier or something."Some people on this bolard have told me to do just that.My "Ron Mexico" alias is "Jon Tobago". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted April 25, 2004 Share Posted April 25, 2004 The Texans look great--the Titans are okay--but I think it would look better it you centered the "t" and not centered the whole logo--they look lop sided... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted April 26, 2004 Share Posted April 26, 2004 This is probably your weakest division. The Texans' set is the best of the lot... I think that logo works on just about anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted April 28, 2004 Author Share Posted April 28, 2004 YAHOO!!!!! I've finished the NFL Hockey project. Here's the AFC West...Denver BroncosKansas City ChiefsOakland RaidersSan Diego ChargersDenver Broncos-I used the Avs' template instead of making a wing-mesh jersey. I think it turned out great. Kansas City Chiefs-A lot of red and yellow used here. That's all I have to say about this jersey.Oakland Raiders-Black, silver, really simple, and Robert Gallery ().San Diego Chargers-Pittsburgh Penguins template (the only template I used twice; see Packers). I thought about cluttering the thing up with lightning bolts, but decided against it. "The time is now to say goodbye, too all my NFL x-overs..."Might decide to finish NBA Football. Might re-do the MLB Basketball project (I'm probably doing this one). Anyways, thanx to everyone for the encouragement throughout this project. The whole NFL Hockey project can be seen here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan79 Posted April 28, 2004 Share Posted April 28, 2004 nice job. these look great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paynomind Posted April 28, 2004 Share Posted April 28, 2004 Way to go, vic. Terriffic. I really like the way the Broncos set looks.Any chance for a light blue Chargers alt? NCFA Sunset Beach Tech - Octopi  ΓΔΒ!  Going to college gets you closer to the real world, kind of like climbing a tree gets you closer to the moon. "...a nice illustration of what you get when skill, talent, and precedent are deducted from 'creativity.' " - James Howard Kunstler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted April 28, 2004 Share Posted April 28, 2004 Very nice job on these last ones. Great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted April 28, 2004 Share Posted April 28, 2004 Overall a fantastic project. These last ones are pretty nice. A good finish.Just a few concerns I have:- this has nothing to do with your design, but that Chiefs concept really highlights how awkward it is for them to have black in the logo but not the uniform.- the Broncos seem weird because I couldn't imagine anything other than their wing jerseys, but I think what you did works. The only problem I have is the lack of orange striping where the white stripe is on the dark jersey (especially since the orange one blue on their football jerseys isn't outlined in white, but the blue on white IS outlined in orange.Thanks for an entertaining project. I followed this from start to finish and was very impressed all along the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NJTank Posted April 29, 2004 Share Posted April 29, 2004 Terrific JOb cant wait for next project like this.As for my reviews of the AFC West Broncos are the best.The Chiefs are good too, the black Raiders looks kinda strange without the shield but I dont know what else you can do and the Chargers you did the best you could do with what they had, but they would need a shield logo or something more for hockey because the bolts only would work on shoulder. www.sportsecyclopedia.com For the best in sports history go to the Sports E-Cyclopedia at http://www.sportsecyclopedia.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted April 29, 2004 Share Posted April 29, 2004 This may be my least favorite division--but still not too bad...I like the Chiefs logo and the black line/logo thing doesn't bother me at all.The Raiders works well too, and well I may get some strong reaction on this--their logo is one of the goofiest looking ones---that guy's face just doesn't fit--still since you weren't making new logos that's their fault not yours.The Chargers was tricky, given that you used helmet logos for the most part--still it needs something else.Overall--some great jerseys...it's tough to have a 32 team league where you love each uni--your success rate here though is quite high--good work! Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesCraven Posted April 29, 2004 Share Posted April 29, 2004 Hey, vic! You forgot to put pants, helmets and socks on the Falcons' concept!Homer J. Simpson:"D'oh!" "I better go take a long walk off a short pier or something."Some people on this bolard have told me to do just that.My "Ron Mexico" alias is "Jon Tobago". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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