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So which text should I pick for my logo?  

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P.S. Just imagine "A" with the text "Bee Designs Inc.".

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I voted for "D" because I like the font.

However "B" sort of has a bee hive feel to it so that would be a good choice.

Disclaimer: If this comment is about an NBA uniform from 2017-2018 or later, do not constitute a lack of acknowledgement of the corporate logo to mean anything other than "the corporate logo is terrible and makes the uniform significantly worse."

 

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Well since I want the text to resemble the logo I think A is out of the running. Which one, which one, it's so hard to choose! ^_^

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to better match the look of your "bee", what about something all-original or built from scratch? your logo has a nice feel to it, and none of those options really gells with it too well. if you do choose any of them, maybe go back and further tweak the text to tighten the kearning (spacing between letters), or overlap some of the characters. another option is to overdo serifs and/or any open ends of the lettering to get a more custom look to it.

you're on the right track to a very good identity mark.

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to better match the look of your "bee", what about something all-original or built from scratch? your logo has a nice feel to it, and none of those options really gells with it too well. if you do choose any of them, maybe go back and further tweak the text to tighten the kearning (spacing between letters), or overlap some of the characters. another option is to overdo serifs and/or any open ends of the lettering to get a more custom look to it.

you're on the right track to a very good identity mark.

So you think the letters might be too close?

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that was an example of things to play with. i think they could be tighter together.

BTW, the logo makes me think of Mickey's Malt Liquor (i couldn't find the mini-keg bottle)

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Well I can see why you'd like to see example D closer but the text on C seems fine.

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Do you mean close like this?

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Here's some more examples of how I could use the text.

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I really like the pointed serifs of "D" and think they tie in with the Bee concept best. I also like the thickness of the capital letters of "D" and think they match the weight of the logo best to my eye.

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I originally voted for B, I thought the Batman Forever font had angles similar to your artwork. I agree with pagan, you might want to draw your own letters for your logo, that way you can match the style of your bee a little closer than with regular fonts.

That aside, I like the outlined treatment of the bottom entry in your last post. It looks like Revue. It looks better than "pirate keg", or whatever the first font is...the one based on E. Carolina? Just be cautious if you skew the lettering yourself. As a vector king, you are probably aware that skewing the art will distort it to a point that the vertical strokes look out of proportion to the horizontal ones...this is evident especially in the B and the N, because those have diagonal strokes that make extra skewing more obvious.

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Dang you people, it looks like it's a tie between C & D......even with the green outlines. What the heck should I do? :D

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