YELDARBfield Posted September 7, 2009 Share Posted September 7, 2009 I am designing some graphics for 2 social clubs (like fraternities and sororities but coed) at Freed-Hardeman University, and I would like a little C&C before I send them to their respective clients.This first one is for my club, Chi Beta Chi (XBX), for use on our intramural sports shirts. Our mascot is the Eagles, so I tried to convey that without putting a literal eagle in the graphic.After uploading this on Photobucket, I noticed that the width of my gold outline needs to be tweaked a little, especially around the X's.This second one is for Gamma Tau Omega for use on their new website. This graphic is based on an old graphic that needed some cleaning up. This graphic will straddle two navbars at the top of the page, hence the blue and green boxes that it sits on here.Of course, this will be downsized for the site.Thoughts? Twitter • Facebook • Instagram • LinkedIn • Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted September 7, 2009 Share Posted September 7, 2009 Very nice, just clean and simple. I love purple and yellow together, so that's my favorite, but great job on both. The only thing I might change is the font in the XBX, it's a little boring, but other than that, really well done. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OpaqueChicken Posted September 7, 2009 Share Posted September 7, 2009 I like the XBX design, but the Gamma Tau Omega design seems a little boring. Maybe make the white outline a little thicker. I AM SCORE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted September 7, 2009 Share Posted September 7, 2009 XBX logo looks great, but it should be cleaned up a bit near the bottom...especially the arc area between the banner and bottom of XBX. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted September 7, 2009 Share Posted September 7, 2009 The XBX one reminds me of FAU. Nice job. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YELDARBfield Posted September 7, 2009 Author Share Posted September 7, 2009 Thanks for the kind words thus far. As far as the GTO graphic is concerned, my logo is just a take on an overcomplicated graphic that they had been using. GTO's webmaster liked what I've shown you guys, so I think I'm done with it.Here's a quick XBX update. I believe I've addressed all of your critiques.¿Mas "C y C," por favor? Twitter • Facebook • Instagram • LinkedIn • Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted September 7, 2009 Share Posted September 7, 2009 Awesome. I think that made it so much better, although it was pretty cool before. Great job. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted September 8, 2009 Share Posted September 8, 2009 Still need to clean up your lines I think. It isn't as noticeable near the top or in the individual letters (although it is present), but it is pretty noticeable how uneven and rough the curves are between the outline of the letters and the banner are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YELDARBfield Posted September 8, 2009 Author Share Posted September 8, 2009 Is this any better, Cola? Twitter • Facebook • Instagram • LinkedIn • Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YELDARBfield Posted September 10, 2009 Author Share Posted September 10, 2009 Bumpity bump.Made a few more tweaks, this time featured in phone background form. Twitter • Facebook • Instagram • LinkedIn • Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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