chickenfish13 Posted September 27, 2009 Share Posted September 27, 2009 OK, so I went from start to finish with the Johnstown Chiefs concept, and I am happy with the way it came out. I wanted to start on some MLB concepts, as I am working on MLB rebrands for Raysox's blog, Down On The Farm. I use the word Random lightly, as the Mets is really the only one I have done, and to start I am only going to post the primary logo that I've done. I don't even know If I will add another team to this thread, but If I ever do another MLB concept, and feel like I could post it, it'll go here.So, first up, the New York Mets.This idea came to me kinda randomly. I know that New York is nicknamed the big apple, and I wanted to see if I could create a logo from that. I based it off their current primary, and put the apple in the middle. The shading is separate in the apple, as it gets split up by the stitches on a baseball. The new wordmark is nothing special, but I feel that it works here. So, thanks for viewing, and C and C. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted September 27, 2009 Share Posted September 27, 2009 I like the idea of incorperating the big apple, and NO black. It's a good start Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted September 27, 2009 Share Posted September 27, 2009 I like it. But I think there's too much going on at the bottom. The balance is a little off.I don't think the apple, bridge, and wordmark should all be in the bottom half of the logo.Maybe move New York above the logo, or toward the top.Or make it smaller, and put it above the bridge? | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted September 27, 2009 Share Posted September 27, 2009 So is this the New York Apples? There's nothing in this logo that says "Mets". The thing about a logo with a somewhat intangible nickname is that unless you write out that nickname, the logo makes little sense. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted September 27, 2009 Share Posted September 27, 2009 The skyline says 'Mets'. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted September 27, 2009 Share Posted September 27, 2009 i like it. the apple fits the logo perfectly...its part of the stadium...in the bottom center...why not in the logo? dont get the blue streak in the apple though...so it looks a little too abstracted there. wordmark looks good. and you did a good job of keeping the overall look of the other logo. and no black is good.i like! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted September 28, 2009 Author Share Posted September 28, 2009 I like the idea of incorperating the big apple, and NO black. It's a good startThanks.I like it. But I think there's too much going on at the bottom. The balance is a little off.I don't think the apple, bridge, and wordmark should all be in the bottom half of the logo.Maybe move New York above the logo, or toward the top.Or make it smaller, and put it above the bridge?Yeah, I tried putting mets in underneath New York, and I may have an update with that.So is this the New York Apples? There's nothing in this logo that says "Mets". The thing about a logo with a somewhat intangible nickname is that unless you write out that nickname, the logo makes little sense.Mets is kinda a sketchy name to design for, but nothing in their current logo says mets, except for the word mets. Once again though, if I have an update, I will include mets in it somewhere.The skyline says 'Mets'.That it does i like it. the apple fits the logo perfectly...its part of the stadium...in the bottom center...why not in the logo? dont get the blue streak in the apple though...so it looks a little too abstracted there. wordmark looks good. and you did a good job of keeping the overall look of the other logo. and no black is good.i like! The blue streaks in the apple are the stitches as if the apple is a ball. It's kinda abstractly in their, but I like that their is something kinda obviously hidden in it. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted September 28, 2009 Author Share Posted September 28, 2009 OK, heres an update--included mets- made the apple bigger, as it is the "big apple"-added cap- added secondary dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDixonDesign Posted September 28, 2009 Share Posted September 28, 2009 I like the idea of the skyline, but the execution of the Wordmark and the Apple need worked on. I feel like the serifs on the Wordmark are too random and unneccesary...good start however! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted September 29, 2009 Author Share Posted September 29, 2009 Bump dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted September 29, 2009 Share Posted September 29, 2009 looks good overall, but i just dont think it looks right without having some type of cursive font... ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted September 30, 2009 Share Posted September 30, 2009 How about making the main logo with the skyline inside an apple shape instead of inside a circle? Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted October 3, 2009 Author Share Posted October 3, 2009 OK, update, I have 2 options for the primary logo: dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgthree Posted October 3, 2009 Share Posted October 3, 2009 double apple is too much, I like the circle. Also, I like the idea of the seam in the apple, but I was wondering if there was another way to do it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted October 3, 2009 Author Share Posted October 3, 2009 I could probably put an actual orange seam in there. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgthree Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 I do not know design all that well but I think trying that out and seeing how it looks would be nice. I feel like the solid lines are a little too abstract. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 I like the concept behind the Mets logo quite a bit. I think you can play up the baseball inside the apple by adding a few simple stitches to the seams. Right now, the two simple blue lines are a bit too minimal. Secondly, I think I would emphasize "Mets" over "New York." The team name seems like way too much of an afterthought here. Finally, everything feels very bottom-heavy. Try looking at moving the skyline up as far as possible, then nudging the bridge up a bit. That way, you might be able to center the apple/ball within the logo circle, and the text wouldn't feel like it's about to fall off the bottom.Very good start, keep at it like you did with the Chiefs concept. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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