BrandMooreArt Posted September 30, 2009 Share Posted September 30, 2009 also working with a new presentation template, inspired by various people here on the boards. feel free to critique that as welli think UCF's current unis are the worst in the nation. theres nothing about them i like. i always thought their Pegasus logo would look great on a helmet, and wanted to try that here. the shoulders being different colors, to me, looks like shoulder amour a knight would wear. at least thats the focus of the design. everything ele is just trying to be "fast" and "consistent". UPDATE - change some things on the pants and changed my template a bit GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firefly Posted September 30, 2009 Share Posted September 30, 2009 You have the bull flipped on the helmet. He's always headed into battle.I'm digging the red jersey/blue pants. There's a nice balance going on. However, something about the blue jersey on red pants isn't working for me. Any chance you could do a jersey with white pants and the white jersey with the red pants? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted September 30, 2009 Author Share Posted September 30, 2009 damn that backwards bull. i will fix that. i did do a white jersey/red pant combo but didnt really like it. ill post it here though tommarrowedit - actually ive got time now GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted September 30, 2009 Author Share Posted September 30, 2009 edit my double post GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dmhtfld Posted September 30, 2009 Share Posted September 30, 2009 both of these concepts are amazingi think the texans ones would look better without the different color colar. just make it the same color as the jersey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted September 30, 2009 Author Share Posted September 30, 2009 both of these concepts are amazingi think the texans ones would look better without the different color colar. just make it the same color as the jerseyno piping around the collar either? just solid? GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saintsfan Posted September 30, 2009 Share Posted September 30, 2009 Not liking the red pants personally. 2011/12 WFL Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beansdooma Posted September 30, 2009 Share Posted September 30, 2009 The Blue/White Texans combo is really nice. Has an awesome pop to it. I also really like the Pegasus helmet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted September 30, 2009 Share Posted September 30, 2009 With the UCF concept, the numbers are too wide. '18' fits, but two full-width digits (i.e. anything but a '1') would not. A good rule of thumb is to always do concepts with numbers like 24 or 35 to get a more accurate representation and to make sure any eventuality will fit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted September 30, 2009 Author Share Posted September 30, 2009 With the UCF concept, the numbers are too wide. '18' fits, but two full-width digits (i.e. anything but a '1') would not. A good rule of thumb is to always do concepts with numbers like 24 or 35 to get a more accurate representation and to make sure any eventuality will fit.good advice. ill swap the numbers on there. #18 is always my default i fi dont know any of the players; it was my number GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elsephen Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 Love the UCF helmet and black uni. Beautiful. And the Texans bull horns on the arms and leg is a great idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 Texans pants would look better without the horn gimmick. Maybe just a single blue next to a single red on the white pants, and a single blue next to a single white on the red pants. It'd make the pants match the sleeves exactly, while enhancing the horn gimmick on the jersey by making it the only non-standard design element in the set. Do it. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted October 4, 2009 Author Share Posted October 4, 2009 Texans pants would look better without the horn gimmick. Maybe just a single blue next to a single red on the white pants, and a single blue next to a single white on the red pants. It'd make the pants match the sleeves exactly, while enhancing the horn gimmick on the jersey by making it the only non-standard design element in the set. Do it.i think you're right. i will try this GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted October 4, 2009 Author Share Posted October 4, 2009 update on pants GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 I think that's better, but I'd try not separating the colors.Look at the blue jersey - the sleeve goes red-blue-white (with a tiny white outline around the red - an outline which may or may not even be necessary.) The pants should go red-blue-white (with the white just being the actual base color of the pants.) Any separation should just be a tiny white piping, to match the white piping around the horn on the sleeve (which again, may not be necessary... not sure.)Same with the other pants - should probably go just white-red, with no separation.Also, I'm not sure about the logo there - may be better on the front hip as opposed to breaking up the striping on the side.Would have to see these change to decide if they're improvements or not - the way you did it may turn out to be the best, but I can't help thinking it could still be improved. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted October 4, 2009 Author Share Posted October 4, 2009 i see what you are saying. i kind of like the seperation though but i will continue to work on it. the reason for the color arrangment on the stripes is because i wanted to use the logo on the hip, and not have the same color passing behind either side of the logo. (red never passes behind the red side, nor does blue). ill try to get some more tweaks up by tommarrow GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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