MikePho3niX Posted October 22, 2009 Share Posted October 22, 2009 sorry multi post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikePho3niX Posted October 22, 2009 Share Posted October 22, 2009 Here's an update, shortened as per chestnutz's suggestion.I like this design. although i have to admit i liked the face one from your first post thought it was different. To even it out! what if you ad a D to the end of your n. i think that little hook its sending it off balance. I do like Davidson look for you as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted October 22, 2009 Share Posted October 22, 2009 On the new idea, I'm not saying I see it this way, but it could definitely be seen as a phallic symbol. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUdraw Posted October 23, 2009 Share Posted October 23, 2009 On the new idea, I'm not saying I see it this way, but it could definitely be seen as a phallic symbol.Now that you saw that.. It even more obvious with the longer and shorter one side by side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted October 28, 2009 Author Share Posted October 28, 2009 In light of the potential "junk" jokes, I went away from the monogram for now, as that's all I can see in any of my sketches. So I made something that I know has been done before, but it is still unique because it's my face, and nobody else has that.. well except for this guy who I work with but that's a different story.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted October 29, 2009 Share Posted October 29, 2009 its not really a logo of any sort.and without wanting to sound disparaging, its not a particularly great rendering.he seems to have one massive nostril and im not really sure what its supposed to say really.id persist with some of the other design stuff to be honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1stDownCreative Posted October 29, 2009 Share Posted October 29, 2009 its not really a logo of any sort.i'm not sure why you think this ISN'T a logo... it is an identifiable mark for an individual or businessJNutini - it has potential... perhaps stylizing it a bit more will give it more a a branded feel than just a cartoon face...perhaps trying a logo as just the goatee and glasses...maybe even adding the bangs in there slightly the res isnt really needed to understand what it is and whats going on there.kinda like this i threw together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted October 29, 2009 Share Posted October 29, 2009 yeah i know what you are saying, but without descending into the esoteric or a battle of semantics, i would call it more of an illustration.now thats fine, but if you are supposed to be representing yourself as a graphic designer, its pretty derivative and weak.again, im not trying to sound harsh, its just my feedback and just an opinion. i just think jnutini could do better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrJack Posted October 29, 2009 Share Posted October 29, 2009 Take the nose and mouth out. Then put it on a black background with no outline so the hair just blends in to the background. Could be cool... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted October 29, 2009 Author Share Posted October 29, 2009 I'm actually beginning to find it quite funny that I'm having such an incredibly difficult time with this. I mean I've made stuff for other people before, hell I sketched up a perfectly fitting logo for my girlfriend's photography, but when it comes to finding something that fits me and my design, I draw a complete blank (no pun intended.. okay maybe slightly intentional). Basically, the more I make a monogram, the more I hate the idea and the look of it, not to mention the more it looks like something I don't want it to look like if you know what I mean. I've still been trying different angles, shapes, and styles with nothing looking right. I have a couple pages of my notebook filled with "JN"'s and no history notes.I'm by no means giving up on this, just stating that this has been one of my biggest designing challenges yet. I re-rendered a rooster that I drew when I was 15, though, so I'm not at a complete mental roadblock. Anyway, I'll keep trying out more options and see what happens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VC// Posted October 29, 2009 Share Posted October 29, 2009 its not really a logo of any sort.i'm not sure why you think this ISN'T a logo... it is an identifiable mark for an individual or businessJNutini - it has potential... perhaps stylizing it a bit more will give it more a a branded feel than just a cartoon face...perhaps trying a logo as just the goatee and glasses...maybe even adding the bangs in there slightly the res isnt really needed to understand what it is and whats going on there.kinda like this i threw togetherCrap, i had this same idea for a logo for myself, my glasses are different and I have a goatee as well, but I'm bald...lol. Back to the drawing board. LETS GO PENGUINS! 5x Stanley Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieRose Posted November 4, 2009 Author Share Posted November 4, 2009 Yet another idea, doesn't look like "junk" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrJack Posted November 25, 2009 Share Posted November 25, 2009 Not bad, i like it a little better than the face. I've been thinking about working on a personal logo for myself and you've finally got me inspired. You'd think my "SS" initials would have infinite possibilities, but I'm struggling! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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