ltravisjr Posted October 16, 2009 Share Posted October 16, 2009 I would reconsider your choice to put the shadows on the upper left part of your shapes. That shows your light source is coming from the bottom-right, and that's not typically the way its done. Folks more classicly trained than I could comment better, but I believe the light source is usually depicted as coming from the upper left, which means your shadows would be on the bottom right.LT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barnes2000 Posted October 17, 2009 Share Posted October 17, 2009 Chickenfish,Do you know how jealous I am of you? To be your age and have access to the software that is around now a days...how lucky you are. I love your determination and patients, not to mention your talent. I can't image the kind of things I could have created when I was your age, if today's technology had existed then. Keep it up and you will go far.The logo is looking better. You're getting a lot of valuable feedback from the pros on this site. Use there help and I'm sure it will turn out quite nice. Good luck to you! -SB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted October 17, 2009 Author Share Posted October 17, 2009 Thanks LT, and barnes. Here is an update with different shadowing. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spammy Posted October 17, 2009 Share Posted October 17, 2009 C-Fish, that last logo you have there is perfect. Work off of that one and you have a winner, also maybe try changing the eye up a little bit, right now it looks just a little too bubbly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted November 3, 2009 Author Share Posted November 3, 2009 I know it's been a while, but I wanted to finalize this, so here is the final version. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted November 3, 2009 Share Posted November 3, 2009 it is a lot crisper than when you started. I like the way the stinger sticks out on the bottom and the wings on top. It gives the logo a nice balance overall DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stennis Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 Hey guys. I'm waiting for c and c in my CHL redesign, but I have been working on this for a couple weeks now, and wanted some feedback. It is for a yellow jacket, and a baseball team, but it has no name right now. It's an update to a logo I did a looooong time ago, and I'd like to know what I can do to make it better. Thanks for the help, and c and c as always.I feel the shadowing and highlights is definitely off, so that would be a focus point. Thanks.Hey chickenfish - you wouldnt happen to live in a certain large city in the heart of the Canadian prairies would you? Ive done some work with the Saskatoon Yellowjackets that has been published the last 2 yrs. Unfortunately I can't see your samples so I dont know if this is the team youre trying to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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