chickenfish13 Posted January 2, 2010 Author Share Posted January 2, 2010 But still its so much better than mine dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted January 2, 2010 Share Posted January 2, 2010 i had a bit of a play with the rough up i made and created a quick concept.Renders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclone20 Posted January 2, 2010 Share Posted January 2, 2010 i had a bit of a play with the rough up i made and created a quick concept.RendersSweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 2, 2010 Share Posted January 2, 2010 That's sweet, what an awesome helmet. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted January 2, 2010 Author Share Posted January 2, 2010 Wow, just wow. How long did it take you to do that? dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted January 3, 2010 Author Share Posted January 3, 2010 OK, heres what I've done. I tried not to make it too similar, and I didn't trace it, I just looked/referenced the real skull, and Davidson's. So, let me know what more I need to do, and thanks a lot to Davidson... I'm in awe of the Chiefs concept by the way dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 3, 2010 Share Posted January 3, 2010 It's definately getting there. I think it's missing something in the nose area but I just can't point it out. Maybe make the edge of the nose go deeper into the skull? Idk Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted January 3, 2010 Author Share Posted January 3, 2010 OK, heres another update. I think I'm close, but again, I'll let you guys decide: dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 3, 2010 Share Posted January 3, 2010 This looks alot better! With that slight addition, I think you've given this guy some character. I also think you still need to fix the nose area, maybe slant it inward more.As a final touch, I think you should lay the skull down ontop of the font, right now it looks like he's balancing with his jaw. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted January 3, 2010 Author Share Posted January 3, 2010 OK, another, I had time, so I thought why not. ( C Jay Z, I will get to updating the Stingers tomorrow, I swear ) dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 3, 2010 Share Posted January 3, 2010 This looks great now. Nice work.(No problem.) Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WoosterGenerals Posted January 3, 2010 Share Posted January 3, 2010 OK, another, I had time, so I thought why not. ( C Jay Z, I will get to updating the Stingers tomorrow, I swear )I keep seeing a sword across the top of the name, I think you might be able to work it in, but it could be too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted January 3, 2010 Share Posted January 3, 2010 this is much nicer. i still think the skull could use more of a forehead. even if some of it is covered by the bandana.and not to have this board be overtaken with that chiefs concept by davidson...but that is awesome. its a totally new take on the nickname chiefs and the style of it is perfect. a lot of detail but it works so well!! DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted January 3, 2010 Share Posted January 3, 2010 id move the eyes and cheeks forward. hes missing some teeth at the bottom. that was a glitch on my quick one. perhaps take out a couple of random teeth elsewhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted January 3, 2010 Author Share Posted January 3, 2010 I agree with you Jaha, I dont care if you talk about it, it's pretty sweet Thanks for the help along the way davidson, it wouldn't have made it very far without you... here's what I hope to be the final update. I moved the eye forward, and I tilted the bandana to show a little more of the forehead. Let me know what more needs to be done, thanks again. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 3, 2010 Share Posted January 3, 2010 Looks perfect. Maybe try that sword idea like Wooster said...sounds like a good one. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted January 3, 2010 Author Share Posted January 3, 2010 I did try it, but It looked a bit to busy, and it was hard to work in. Thanks to wooster for the idea though. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted January 3, 2010 Share Posted January 3, 2010 Definitely add more teeth to the lower jaw, and make the knot of the bandanna come out past the skull, instead of being on it. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted January 3, 2010 Author Share Posted January 3, 2010 OK, heres another update, following chucks advice. I made the bandana come back a bit, but it looked awkward all the way off, so I didn't do that... let me know again dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spammy Posted January 3, 2010 Share Posted January 3, 2010 Looks good, why don't you try connecting the teeth to the jaw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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