logo-maker Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 Dallas StarsI based this jersey set on a modern version of the first Stars home jersey with a little yellow added for contrast.HomeAwayC&C always appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 I'm from Atlanta so I have no clue about hockey concepts at all.but this looks really well thought out and nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rainmaker17 Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 WAY better then what they wear now. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 I'm from Atlanta so I have no clue about hockey concepts at all.There's not a cause and effect relationship, lol.I do like this concept, it's an improvement, but why not keep the inner color of the half-stripe white on the road jersey, that way you'll have the same striping on each, that might look cool. Although the piping might be overkill, reebok would do it, and I do like the continuity of the piping onto the pants. My only suggestion would be to next time come up with a non-edge template. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logo-maker Posted January 28, 2010 Author Share Posted January 28, 2010 I'm from Atlanta so I have no clue about hockey concepts at all.There's not a cause and effect relationship, lol.I do like this concept, it's an improvement, but why not keep the inner color of the half-stripe white on the road jersey, that way you'll have the same striping on each, that might look cool. Although the piping might be overkill, reebok would do it, and I do like the continuity of the piping onto the pants. My only suggestion would be to next time come up with a non-edge template.Interestingly enough, the point of this concept and others is to utilize the Edge templates better than Reebok has. To me, if the league is going to use these templates, then the least they could do would be to generates well thought out jersey sets (unlike what they have shown me so far). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lopernv Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 To be honest I'm not crazy about 'em. If you are going to start stripes you might as well finish them. Gold piping seems like it gets cut off awkwardly at the back and I'm not too fond of a black home. Number and name font works but I'm not sure the 90's looking Stars logo does. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 As a passionate Dallas Stars fan I must say I do not like this at all. Here is what I would change:1) The majority of Stars fans want them to return to green, including me.2) The piping is one of the reason I dislike RBK edge so much. Not only do we find piping here, but unfinished piping at that! 3) Stick with the green in the middle of the Star in the away jersey.4) If you are going to stick with the piping, atleast remove the ones the run down the front of the jersey.By having a bottom horizontal stripe it will sort of look like the Dallas Stars original white jerseys, which would be a plus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lopernv Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 1) The majority of Stars fans want them to return to green, including me.[citation needed] Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 1) The majority of Stars fans want them to return to green, including me.[citation needed]From my discussion with Stars fans, those who care about jerseys, the majority want the green to come back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scraw28 Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 the stripes need to wrap around the waist of the sweater and eliminate the stripes off of the sleeves otherwise great concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rainmaker17 Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 1) The majority of Stars fans want them to return to green, including me.[citation needed]From my discussion with Stars fans, those who care about jerseys, the majority want the green to come back.I'll back him on this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 1) The majority of Stars fans want them to return to green, including me.[citation needed]From my discussion with Stars fans, those who care about jerseys, the majority want the green to come back.I'll back him on this.as will i.stars fans pretty much want green as much as possible. then gold... then black if it has to be there. there's a reason so many fans still call it "the green and gold" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charger77 Posted January 28, 2010 Share Posted January 28, 2010 All you need is piping to no where and arm pit coloring and then you would have included every aspect of the Edge jersey.-Dan PotD May 11th, 2011looooooogodud: June 7th 2010 - July 5th 2012 Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logo-maker Posted January 28, 2010 Author Share Posted January 28, 2010 Thanks for the critique (it's all I really wanted after featuring my Oilers concept that got very like due to being a very traditional look).I will hope to have an update soon (classes just started).Keep up the C&C, Thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logo-maker Posted January 30, 2010 Author Share Posted January 30, 2010 UPDATEChanges:-Got rid of any black.-Made primary color green.-Got rid if the extraneous pipping.-Changed the center of the star in the away to green and the home to white. HomeAwayComments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MiK Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 i like it. love the elimination of black but the green arm/shoulders on the away seems distant from the rest of the set. i can't put my finger on it but there is something about it. much better than what they wear now though, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 I am loving the update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logo-maker Posted January 30, 2010 Author Share Posted January 30, 2010 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
letterform Posted January 30, 2010 Share Posted January 30, 2010 Can you knock off with the "using the RBK template better" in your titles please. You make it sound like you're giving an expert opinion when you're really just colouring in templates without rhyme or reason. I'm not saying don't post anything. Just spare us the title. DEATH TO REEBOK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logo-maker Posted January 30, 2010 Author Share Posted January 30, 2010 Ok, next time I will title it "Using the Edge system better than Reebok's sorry a$$ designers" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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