Number 8 Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 Uploaded with ImageShack.usI still have some work to do but I think this is the best logo ive ever made and just want to make it better so any c and c would be much appreciated My concept blog http://hockeyconcepts.blogspot.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted April 22, 2010 Share Posted April 22, 2010 Looks like a wig with a beak attached to it. It is drastically in need of more detail and shadowing, IMO.Also, the "WASHINGTON" part of the script is basically unreadable. Black-on-blue? No thanks.Keep at it, though, and you'll have a really good logo here. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 I had NO idea there was a 'Washington' in that logo til you said that.I like the 'Capitals' script, though. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 You might want to add some color around the neck like this.I agree with the blue on black font, it is a no-no. Also the shading on the A's is going a different way than on any other letters and it bothers me. Maybe make him look more fierce? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Number 8 Posted April 23, 2010 Author Share Posted April 23, 2010 OK im going to make the eyes more fierce and add some feathers around the neck area to start. By the way i didnt make this script its from a caps logo. Im also going to fix the script My concept blog http://hockeyconcepts.blogspot.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 It's got potential to be a good design, but yes black on blue won't work, as many have stated above. Also, try and fix up the beak and eyes of the eagle. It's just too rough on the edges. Try possibly simplifying the feathers on the eagle's head a bit. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted April 23, 2010 Share Posted April 23, 2010 Definitely needs work, but it does have potential.Right now it looks more like a seagull than an eagle, one thing I notice is that the eye doesn't look like an eagle's eye at all.Keep at it though. Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted April 24, 2010 Share Posted April 24, 2010 i dont want to be too harsh here, because the layout you have can work, but here i go...it looks like you just pasted a generic bird face behind the old capitals wordmark. the outer shapes of the beak and feathers around the back of the head have too much detail or too much jaggedness while the interior of the logo has too little detail as far as shading goes. keep working on making it flow together as a whole logo (rather than just a bird and a wordmark placed together) and it can work. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Number 8 Posted April 25, 2010 Author Share Posted April 25, 2010 Ok guys thanks for the help so far. I did some work on it and I dont consider it finished in any means but, is this going in the right direction?Uploaded with ImageShack.us My concept blog http://hockeyconcepts.blogspot.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steveolaxo Posted April 25, 2010 Share Posted April 25, 2010 I like it but i remember the caps having a logo similar to this that they never used. good job tho. i like the font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zmspartans Posted April 25, 2010 Share Posted April 25, 2010 its an improvement , but it still doesnt look "fierce" enough . maybe do something to the eye or possibly add black somewhere . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eagle Eye Customs Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 its an improvement , but it still doesnt look "fierce" enough . maybe do something to the eye or possibly add black somewhere .Agreed. Honestly, the first thing I thought of was this: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 ^ HAHA.I seriously thought it was a sea gull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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