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Going off the suggestions in jayjackson's thread, I've started my own baseball template.

Comments? Anything is appreciated.

In the preview, the colors look a bit washed out from the .png, Oh well doesn't matter for this.

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Looks nice and simple, but the fold in the first uniform really ruins hte script. Any way to fix that?

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Looks nice and simple, but the fold in the first uniform really ruins hte script. Any way to fix that?

Yeah, that was just how i did it, Its not actually in the way at all...Just something i tried out, seeing as how on baseball uniforms the script actually IS seperated and occasionally looks as such.

Doesnt effect anything unless you want it to.

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I'm going to give you a lot of critique on this thing but it's not because I don't like it. I think it is great and has tons of potential. There are a few things that do need to be done to make this thing top of the line.

-Your jersey opening for the Home version is backwards. That needs to be changed.

-You need stitching. Right off the top of my head the sleeve separation, the fly on the pants, hat stitching all need to be done.

-Put some detail in the glove and shoes.

-Shadowing for the skin needs to be added.

-Add buttons and close up that opening at the bottom.

-Clean the cap up to make it more crisp. It looks uneven from the bill to the top of the crown. Add a button at the top too.

-Add a belt buckle.

-Show different shades of shadowing. I like what you have now but maybe add a lighter layer. I would especially use this where the jersey and pants separate. Right now it looks like Jose Reyes has his jersey and pants connected. This is a common problem when doing a template for a single color uniform.

-Have at least one of the templates show the stirrups. It's tricky but it can be done.

That is all for now. If you need any help or want to know anything else about how I do my templates please don't hesitate to message me.

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I'm going to give you a lot of critique on this thing but it's not because I don't like it. I think it is great and has tons of potential. There are a few things that do need to be done to make this thing top of the line.

-Your jersey opening for the Home version is backwards. That needs to be changed.

-You need stitching. Right off the top of my head the sleeve separation, the fly on the pants, hat stitching all need to be done.

-Put some detail in the glove and shoes.

-Shadowing for the skin needs to be added.

-Add buttons and close up that opening at the bottom.

-Clean the cap up to make it more crisp. It looks uneven from the bill to the top of the crown. Add a button at the top too.

-Add a belt buckle.

-Show different shades of shadowing. I like what you have now but maybe add a lighter layer. I would especially use this where the jersey and pants separate. Right now it looks like Jose Reyes has his jersey and pants connected. This is a common problem when doing a template for a single color uniform.

-Have at least one of the templates show the stirrups. It's tricky but it can be done.

That is all for now. If you need any help or want to know anything else about how I do my templates please don't hesitate to message me.

Great critiques, and all pretty much true. Stupid mistakes + not being finished yet sum up my answer to most of these. I'll be getting on all of these issues asap.

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here is an update, granted nothing major. However, the issue was raised about shadowing the face. I am down to shadow the arms, but for the face, unless someone wants me to decide on something generic, I think its alot of fun to give a small bit of detail that makes it obvious who the player is, you know?

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