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I need serious help on this logo...I was thinking about ditching it if I didn't spend so much time on it... It just seems that theres everything wrong with it.

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I think it looks fairly well rendered, unless you were being sarcastic. I'd be careful on how many divets you use on the fins, it tends to be a little bit distracting. Other than that, you've nailed it.

(By the way, you forgot to recolor the bottom triangle on the tailfin.)

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I think it looks fairly well rendered, unless you were being sarcastic. I'd be careful on how many divets you use on the fins, it tends to be a little bit distracting. Other than that, you've nailed it.

(By the way, you forgot to recolor the bottom triangle on the tailfin.)

Just doesn't look like much too me. It's meant to be a sports logo for a Personal baseball league, but it's empty and lacks something. Not sure what.

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I think it looks great - my only suggestion would be to replace the bronze outline with a color with more pop - i'm not sure you're at liberty to change the colors though. If not, added another cool color for the skin (Purple/Aqua/Blue etc.)?

Oh, and maybe incorp. the given sport its for (i.e. baseball bat, or ball?).

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I think it looks great - my only suggestion would be to replace the bronze outline with a color with more pop - i'm not sure you're at liberty to change the colors though. If not, added another cool color for the skin (Purple/Aqua/Blue etc.)?

Oh, and maybe incorp. the given sport its for (i.e. baseball bat, or ball?).

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The head really reminds me of a hummingbird, I just can't get that out of my head. The body looks great, I'm sure the head part is just me.

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