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The primary/wordmark/numbers all look really good. I especially like the dark green hiding subtly under the black wordmark.

On the other hand, your "T" logo, which I imagine is the cap logo, looks a bit disjointed. The warning flags seem to sit randomly atop the letter, as opposed to being attached or layered, etc. I'm not exactly sure how the two items are supposed to fit together here.

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I would place the palm tree over the T, and attach the flags to it. It would add more flow.

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I think that its because they kind of look thrown on there. I really like everything else, but I'm not sure how those flags could work.

Do you think they should be taken out of the Primary logo, and used as a secondary logo?

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I think that its because they kind of look thrown on there. I really like everything else, but I'm not sure how those flags could work.

Do you think they should be taken out of the Primary logo, and used as a secondary logo?

Yeah but then youd have to add something to the primary.

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Back in September I posted a concept of the Miami Tropics... well I decided to try and update it a little. Trying to get back into things...

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Any chance you would be willing to take a similar stab for my Honolulu Sun Rays? Its for MLB2K10 pc game?

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So is this going to be a part of your attempted baseball league concept? I'd really love to see that; fantasy leagues are my favourite kind of concept.

Anyhoo, are you planning on designing uniforms to go along with the logos (which are fabulous, by the way).

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At first glace I thought the warning flags on the tree were actually "Angry Eyes" on the baseball. It took me a second to register what it was -- even though I saw the original concept.

I think you need some negative space above and below the warning flags. The top just flows into the palm tree and the bottom gets wrapped into the "banner" portion of the words.

If you put a little space in between I think you would set apart the flags more and make them a little more prominent. Would help "clean up" the logo a bit, too.

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I doubt it. Take a look at the three leaves to the far right they are exactly the same in both logos. It's more likely he used the all star image as a reference......or....

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