tiger13x Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 Its pretty decent. A little too cartoonist. 7 of the Fastest in the NFL"The Player Formerly Known As Mousecop" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 Its pretty decent. A little too cartoonist.So what could I do to fix that? I'm sorry, it's just this is my first attempt at this stuff, so I need all the advice I can get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahgee Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 Its pretty decent. A little too cartoonist.So what could I do to fix that? I'm sorry, it's just this is my first attempt at this stuff, so I need all the advice I can get.curve the lines, make the baseball streak more streaky and less shapey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 I cant find it. If you want feedback, make it easy on us, Im not going to go through links and popup blockers just to see it and my guess is others might feel the same way. Just a suggestion, not trying to be a dick. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 I cant find it. If you want feedback, make it easy on us, Im not going to go through links and popup blockers just to see it and my guess is others might feel the same way. Just a suggestion, not trying to be a dick.Not a problem, if you could just tell me how to get the picture to show up in the thread so I don't need a stupid link... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 I cant find it. If you want feedback, make it easy on us, Im not going to go through links and popup blockers just to see it and my guess is others might feel the same way. Just a suggestion, not trying to be a dick.Not a problem, if you could just tell me how to get the picture to show up in the thread so I don't need a stupid link... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger13x Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 Jahgee took the words out of my mouth. Look at the MLB and other league logos for a base guide. 7 of the Fastest in the NFL"The Player Formerly Known As Mousecop" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 I cant find it. If you want feedback, make it easy on us, Im not going to go through links and popup blockers just to see it and my guess is others might feel the same way. Just a suggestion, not trying to be a dick.Not a problem, if you could just tell me how to get the picture to show up in the thread so I don't need a stupid link...I understand, I didnt know how to upload images either at first. What I do is set up an account on photobucket.com. Upload images on that site. Then click on the "Direct Link" which appears if you place the mouse cursor over the image there. Then when posting on Creamer's site here, click the "Insert Image" icon in the above menu. Then paste the link into there and paste it in.It's kind of a lot of work and tedious, but hopefully that helps. If you need more clarification, just ask. Most people are pretty helpful around here. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 Alright, with help from jaha32, I have figured out how to post in pictures. Here is the original league logo. I am working on a "less cartoony" one later tonight. I'll post that one, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 1. There is a lot of wasted space.2. The ball looks to be shaped wrong.3. The stitching looks too inconsistent.4. The font is boring.I would find something other than paint. It seems like you are working harder than you have to, and there are better tools out there.Keep practicing, you can only improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 1. There is a lot of wasted space.2. The ball looks to be shaped wrong.3. The stitching looks too inconsistent.4. The font is boring.I would find something other than paint. It seems like you are working harder than you have to, and there are better tools out there.Keep practicing, you can only improve.1. It is modeled loosely after the MLB logo.2. It's an exact circle.3. I know.4. So what font would you suggest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 Okay. I want to do my first team by the end of the week. I need a team name for an Oakland team.Any suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger13x Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 Oakland regulators?try using PAINT.NET 7 of the Fastest in the NFL"The Player Formerly Known As Mousecop" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 1. There is a lot of wasted space.2. The ball looks to be shaped wrong.3. The stitching looks too inconsistent.4. The font is boring.I would find something other than paint. It seems like you are working harder than you have to, and there are better tools out there.Keep practicing, you can only improve.1. It is modeled loosely after the MLB logo.2. It's an exact circle.3. I know.4. So what font would you suggest?1. I'm well aware that it is based off of the MLB logo. It still has a lot of wasted space. Your action is taking your eye away for the box, but you have bold colors within the box. It is conflicting. I would personally make the motion curve within the box more, and the ball only slightly exit the box. It fills the space better, yet still gives that "breaking free" motion.2. Your baseball is roughly 204 points wide, and 175 points tall. 4. I would suggest confining the "WBL" between the stitching, with a squeeze type effect.Other suggestions:Keep the ball white. It offers a nice contrast to you background colors.Download Paint.net. Practice. You will get there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 I made a new logo. I actually think that this one's much better. I'm really hoping that people LOVE it, because I'm still using paint (it's free. If there's a better free one, let me know), so it's incredibly hard to edit it one it's done.Here it is- The World Baseball League: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger13x Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 PAINT.NET is a better free program. Not bad though. 7 of the Fastest in the NFL"The Player Formerly Known As Mousecop" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 Oakland regulators?try using PAINT.NETI'll take a look at paint.net, but my dad is the only one who can install stuff on my computer, so it would be hard...Oakland Regulators-- It's a decent name, but it would be hard to do a really good concept, & I want something that's related to the city itself... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 Oakland regulators?try using PAINT.NETAlright, I downloaded PAINT. NET, but I don't quite get how to edit with it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger13x Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 Oakland OakiesOakland Baymen (Bay Men)Ref to east bay. 7 of the Fastest in the NFL"The Player Formerly Known As Mousecop" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger13x Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 Your dad is the only one who can install? I don't want to impose, but how old are you? 7 of the Fastest in the NFL"The Player Formerly Known As Mousecop" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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