AnythingChicago Posted February 22, 2011 Author Share Posted February 22, 2011 I hate to be a pain, but really?And 7 of those replies were mine... People don't comment much around here unless a request is involved. And, yes, begging for comments makes you come across as a painI dunno, some concepts get a crap load of replies... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted February 23, 2011 Author Share Posted February 23, 2011 Alright, I've got two threes and a five. Is there anything that the voters suggest I should change? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted February 23, 2011 Share Posted February 23, 2011 Okay here goes.-Make the font on the jerseys cleaner (part of the E is chopped off, same with the O in Ross)-Don't use a clip art image for the UFO-Put more detail into the alien head logo-Add some piping or pinstripes-Take away the collar almost no baseball teams wear T-shirts out on the field (BTW the back of the home jersey doesn't have a green collar)-Color in the "inside" of the jerseyThat's about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted February 23, 2011 Share Posted February 23, 2011 Add larger numbers on the back to that list. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cameroncrazie07 Posted February 23, 2011 Share Posted February 23, 2011 O honestly think it looks fine the way it is now. I like it way better than the first one. The Core 4 Sports Podcast Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted February 23, 2011 Author Share Posted February 23, 2011 Okay here goes.-Make the font on the jerseys cleaner (part of the E is chopped off, same with the O in Ross)-Don't use a clip art image for the UFO-Put more detail into the alien head logo-Add some piping or pinstripes-Take away the collar almost no baseball teams wear T-shirts out on the field (BTW the back of the home jersey doesn't have a green collar)-Color in the "inside" of the jerseyThat's about it. Thanks for the C&C! But first off, the font is supposed to be like that (it's a quirky font). Second, I used the simpler alien and UFO logos because I really don't know how to make logos... Any advice?I will get to the rest of your comments ASAP (which might be up tonight). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tvko Posted February 24, 2011 Share Posted February 24, 2011 The font sucks. It's a clever idea and I like the new colors, but use a script or another font. You know what they say, "Traditionalist's can go die in a hole if they don't like it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeFrank Posted February 24, 2011 Share Posted February 24, 2011 The execution is fine, but everything else just does not work. The colors are bad, the logos are corny, the font is unreadable, and YEA. I mean, you can make a good concept, but just not with the Roswell Invaders. concepts: washington football (2017) ... nfl (2013) ... yikes potd 10/20/12 origin story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted February 24, 2011 Author Share Posted February 24, 2011 Thanks for all the comments, guys. When I started putting down the blueprint for this, I knew it would be a hit and miss kind of thing. And I guess I struck out. So I'm just gonna take one for the team here and call it a day.If anyone's still interested, I am still working on my "College Football Teams like Oregon" concepts. I am currently working on Baylor but am in need of a font. If anyone has that font or something similar, feel free to PM me or post it in my "Baylor font" thread in the requests section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 27, 2011 Author Share Posted April 27, 2011 Who voted in the poll here? It bumped this thing all the way back to the 1st page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 I would try a chocolate brown with lime green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 27, 2011 Author Share Posted April 27, 2011 I would try a chocolate brown with lime green.1. Already have.2. I am no longer working on this concept. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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