Littlem27 Posted April 4, 2011 Share Posted April 4, 2011 This is my first jersey concept submittedC&C Please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted April 4, 2011 Share Posted April 4, 2011 Quite honestly, it looks like a five-minute fill-tool extravaganza. You didn't even put numbers or a NOB on the back, and having the same logo on the hat AND the jersey is a bit excessive. This needs a lot more work. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Littlem27 Posted April 4, 2011 Author Share Posted April 4, 2011 thanks Lights out and it is a fast paint concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted April 4, 2011 Share Posted April 4, 2011 See, there's your problem. Great concepts can be made on Paint - or any other software - but it takes time, effort, and creativity. I'd recommend going back to the drawing board on this one and spending more time to make it great. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Littlem27 Posted April 4, 2011 Author Share Posted April 4, 2011 thanks i will Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Littlem27 Posted April 13, 2011 Author Share Posted April 13, 2011 OK so I've updated my design with some piping, a slightly darker color pallet, and a NOB and Numberany better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 Stiil looks rushed and very distasteful. you should work more on this. develop it more. and make it better. Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 OK so I've updated my design with some piping, a slightly darker color pallet, and a NOB and Numberany better?Well, it's a start. The hat looks alright, but on the side view I would add a partial visual of the Jays logo and add a MLB logo to the back of the cap. As for the numbers, I personally love them. But, I'm questioning the position of the numbers on the front of the jersey. I'm thinking they could benefit from being lifted a little. Also, as a personal touch an addition of their maple leaf logo on the left sleeve could make this look perfect. Maybe even add some pinstripes to the pants for good measure. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitz Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 Looks too Bush league/High School.... Just the way its coloured I think. Also ditch that craptastic toothpaste "T" logo - that will ruin a concept right off the bat!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milo Meningocele Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 That's a lot of gray (or black, I can't tell), for a Jays concept where you've emphasized BLUE in capital letters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 That's a lot of gray (or black, I can't tell), for a Jays concept where you've emphasized BLUE in capital letters.it"s gray Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 You guys claim this concept is "Rushed," "Bush league," "High School," etc yet it doesn't look much different from what most MLB teams are currently wearing. I mean really how much room for creativity is there for a baseball jersey? I wouldn't bat an eye if the Blue Jays wore this on the field. Getting to the concept itself I like what he's done, he's taken the current logos and colours and given Blue a greater role. For a first concept this is not bad at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Littlem27 Posted April 13, 2011 Author Share Posted April 13, 2011 You guys claim this concept is "Rushed," "Bush league," "High School," etc yet it doesn't look much different from what most MLB teams are currently wearing. I mean really how much room for creativity is there for a baseball jersey? I wouldn't bat an eye if the Blue Jays wore this on the field. Getting to the concept itself I like what he's done, he's taken the current logos and colours and given Blue a greater role. For a first concept this is not bad at all.Thanks morgo and thanks to all for your comments, they have really helped me with this. Still have some tweaks to make but it's almost done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 Stiil looks rushed and very distasteful. you should work more on this. develop it more. and make it better.The irony of you saying this is staggering, to say the least.@Littlem27 - this is an improvement for sure. I'm not sold on the graphite-and-navy pinwheel cap, and the "7" on the back is pixellated, but overall it looks solid. Maybe you should try seeing how graphite pants would look with the jersey. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Littlem27 Posted April 14, 2011 Author Share Posted April 14, 2011 Thanks lights out and I did look at graphite pants and they just didn't look right but maybe a little bit more tweaking to the numbers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 Try a Baseball Font from EriqJaffe. Link in Paint User Paradise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Littlem27 Posted April 15, 2011 Author Share Posted April 15, 2011 Tried but having trouble with it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted April 15, 2011 Share Posted April 15, 2011 and the NCAA image fonts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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