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MTWillie

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I need some advice and comments on this. Here is the image I started with.

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And this is what I have come up with so far.

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My biggest challenge has been the beak, as I'm not sure what I should do with it.

I'm in no condition to post...wait! I shouldn't listen to myself, I'm drunk!

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I didn't realize that the black part was the beak until I stared at it for like 5 minutes.

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there are other parts that need to be better defined but thi is a nice start and silhouette.

for the beak, you need to take a closer look at the reference photo and define the nostril and beak more realistically. think about how you need to define the mouth or upper/lower beak

 

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Didn't get a lot of time today to do anything to it, but I've started defining the beak more. Even just this tiny change seems to make a big difference. I also made the eye larger, and moved it farther to the left.

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Also, I think I need to shave some off the neck portion on the bottom. Something just feels off about it. I don't want to follow the exact lines of the original hawk image, but still be able to look at it and know what it is.

I'm in no condition to post...wait! I shouldn't listen to myself, I'm drunk!

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...and boom goes the dynamite. This is the same guy who took a couple logos of mine, made his own tweaks, and called it his. I kept it private as it wasn't a huge deal to me at the time, it's just irritating.

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