BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 Milwaukee BucksI thought I would go retro with this.. so i made it seem more retro (with scripts and all). i thought about changing the numbers. but I wanted feedback on this first. and the logo is supposed to represent like buck"s horns breaking out of a basketball.. through its paint.. so dont expect flashyi also thought about changing the alt.. but i could not figure out what to do with it.. so I just left it as it isUniformsLogoTeams Done -Milwaukee Bucks - April 6th 2011Houston Rockets - April 8th 2011 Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrAwesomeberry Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 It's a pretty decent design, but why is the primary red with white shorts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 7, 2011 Author Share Posted April 7, 2011 I thought I would try for something diffrent and not usally done. to get my name planted here. Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 Sorry, but this looks really sloppy and rushed. Your logo is stretched and pixellated, as are the large scripts. Furthermore, red jerseys with white shorts at home isn't exactly the most appealing look.I can understand trying to use unique aspects - that's all I ever do with my concepts. But they have to serve a purpose, and it doesn't seem like those white shorts serve a purpose. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 7, 2011 Author Share Posted April 7, 2011 Sorry, but this looks really sloppy and rushed. Your logo is stretched and pixellated, as are the large scripts. Furthermore, red jerseys with white shorts at home isn't exactly the most appealing look.I worked on if for a few days.. I strechted the logo so you could see it better.. ehh on the scrpits and the red jerseys with white pants.. ill fix that I guess in a update.. any ideas on changes.. or possibly a new alternate?and I thought the logo was origional and creative.?edit: changed home pants to red Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loogodude90 Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 So is the primary jersey the home jersey? I'm not sure if I like the idea of a red home jersey, especially if the road jersey is green.Also, I don't think it's a good idea to have the green letters on the red jersey. It's hard to read. WIZARDS ORIOLES CAPITALS RAVENS UNITED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 7, 2011 Author Share Posted April 7, 2011 So is the primary jersey the home jersey? I'm not sure if I like the idea of a red home jersey, especially if the road jersey is green.Also, I don't think it's a good idea to have the green letters on the red jersey. It's hard to read.the first jersey is the home jersey. (the red Bucks one). and the letters are white. not green. (white on all three jerseys)edit: OH WAIT you meant the player names.. my badedit2: fixed green letters on home jersey Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YessSir32 Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 These are very nice, like them. Detroit Falcons (NABL) | Detroit Gears (UFL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LetsGoOakland9 Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 Shouldn't there be a white jersey? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Discogod Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 The wordmark is miles ahead of the bevelled crap they have now, but I'd like to see a white home, and I think the green should be primary road.Otherwise, pretty solid for a first concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 Shouldn't there be a white jersey?how did it take so many replies for anyone to comment on that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loogodude90 Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 Shouldn't there be a white jersey?how did it take so many replies for anyone to comment on that?Pretty much all of the replies touched on that. WIZARDS ORIOLES CAPITALS RAVENS UNITED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 7, 2011 Author Share Posted April 7, 2011 UPDATE. Home jersey is now white.. script and numbers on home jersey are now Buck Red. as I like to call it. Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 The alternate says atl. Just slow down and triple check every detail until you're completely satisfied with what you put out there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 The alternate says atl. Just slow down and triple check every detail until you're completely satisfied with what you put out there.I have to admit, thats the first thing I saw when looking at this concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 7, 2011 Author Share Posted April 7, 2011 The alternate says atl. Just slow down and triple check every detail until you're completely satisfied with what you put out there.atl is SHORT for alternate.. geezus. but I think ive done a decent job with this concept. Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 The alternate says atl. Just slow down and triple check every detail until you're completely satisfied with what you put out there.atl is SHORT for alternate.. geezus. but I think ive done a decent job with this concept.Wouldn't it be ALT? You did do a decent job, but if you want to make it better you should take more time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 7, 2011 Author Share Posted April 7, 2011 The alternate says atl. Just slow down and triple check every detail until you're completely satisfied with what you put out there.atl is SHORT for alternate.. geezus. but I think ive done a decent job with this concept.Wouldn't it be ALT? You did do a decent job, but if you want to make it better you should take more time.ehh im not the best at those small details.. and nice advice.. next concept I will take more time.. Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 You do have a lot of potential. I expect to see more concepts from you in the future! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 7, 2011 Author Share Posted April 7, 2011 You do have a lot of potential. I expect to see more concepts from you in the future!you will.. Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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