DC in Da House w/o a Doubt Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 you did four for the other teams, you should just add a gold uni for the heck of itI will put that on my to-do list.Any more C&C from y'all? (<<<< )The gray one needs some piping in my opinion... looks too plain.And I'm still waiting/looking forward to your WVU rendition! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 16, 2011 Author Share Posted April 16, 2011 Updated on page 2 with jersey piping. Gold Sunday alt still in the works... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 16, 2011 Author Share Posted April 16, 2011 Updated once again with gold alt and green alt update. I'm not sure if I liked the other green alt better...I could use some advice there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 16, 2011 Author Share Posted April 16, 2011 Bump. Any C&C on the updated Bulls? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 17, 2011 Author Share Posted April 17, 2011 Bump. Anything else you guys want to say before I start on West Virginia? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryptik Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 The white on the green alt stands out a bit much and makes the logo feel a lot larger than it actually is. Maybe try making the logos and numbers gold w/white trim instead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 17, 2011 Author Share Posted April 17, 2011 The white on the green alt stands out a bit much and makes the logo feel a lot larger than it actually is. Maybe try making the logos and numbers gold w/white trim instead?Updated again. Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryptik Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 The white on the green alt stands out a bit much and makes the logo feel a lot larger than it actually is. Maybe try making the logos and numbers gold w/white trim instead?Updated again. Better?You missed the main logo on the front, but definitely much better IMO. The White just comes off too bright on that shade of green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tvko Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 How do you expect that to work in real life? In the middle of the jersey (where the buttons are) the bull logo would get split a lotYou think is bad?The bull would be worse. You know what they say, "Traditionalist's can go die in a hole if they don't like it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 17, 2011 Author Share Posted April 17, 2011 The white on the green alt stands out a bit much and makes the logo feel a lot larger than it actually is. Maybe try making the logos and numbers gold w/white trim instead?Updated again. Better?You missed the main logo on the front, but definitely much better IMO. The White just comes off too bright on that shade of green.I decided to keep the script white; when I tries gold it turned out to be too much gold. You'll just have to trust me on that.How do you expect that to work in real life? In the middle of the jersey (where the buttons are) the bull logo would get split a lotYou think is bad?The bull would be worse.It's just a concept. I'm not going to worry about the possibility of the script being choppy because of a button down jersey.EDIT: And that picture is of a woman in a DBacks jersey, so it's worse than when the men where it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tvko Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 Concepts are supposed to be concepts for actual uniforms, not just on the internet. It's still a part of the entire presentation, and it wouldn't work in real life.Also, it's a man. There's a girl next to him (hence the hair), but it's a man. You know what they say, "Traditionalist's can go die in a hole if they don't like it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 17, 2011 Author Share Posted April 17, 2011 Concepts are supposed to be concepts for actual uniforms, not just on the internet. It's still a part of the entire presentation, and it wouldn't work in real life.Also, it's a man. There's a girl next to him (hence the hair), but it's a man.It would be fine. It's obvious what the DBacks jersey says, and that would also be the case here. The Rays have the same thing. It's okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ink Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 Concepts are supposed to be concepts for actual uniforms, not just on the internet. It's still a part of the entire presentation, and it wouldn't work in real life.Also, it's a man. There's a girl next to him (hence the hair), but it's a man.I'm 100% certain that's a woman's jersey. Notice the V cut. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 18, 2011 Author Share Posted April 18, 2011 Here's a picture for comparison....and the one tvko posted... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tvko Posted April 18, 2011 Share Posted April 18, 2011 Here's a picture for comparison....and the one tvko posted...It still happens, and it's often just like (even sometimes worse) the one I posted regardless of if it's a womens jersey or not. The point is that with the "U" Bull, it would be extreme and even illegible at times.(The reason it looks like a V-neck is because one button is unbuttoned.) You know what they say, "Traditionalist's can go die in a hole if they don't like it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 18, 2011 Author Share Posted April 18, 2011 Begging Upon More Posts... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 18, 2011 Author Share Posted April 18, 2011 The purpose for this post is to move my concept up on the concepts "home page".(I'm getting tired of saying "bump" all the time.)I will also announce that West Virginia will be my last concept in this series, if I even decide to waste my time on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted April 18, 2011 Share Posted April 18, 2011 I'm very impressed at your progression as a designer. Just a couple of months ago there was that Roswell Invaders concept. Now you have some pretty solid concepts up. I just wanted to applaud you for learning from criticism and improving yourself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 18, 2011 Author Share Posted April 18, 2011 I'm very impressed at your progression as a designer. Just a couple of months ago there was that Roswell Invaders concept. Now you have some pretty solid concepts up. I just wanted to applaud you for learning from criticism and improving yourself.Thank you. I greatly appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted April 18, 2011 Share Posted April 18, 2011 Make the white script on the green uniform gold and USF if perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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