BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 This is now a series.. any suggestions on who I should do next? and C&C on the Jazz jersey still welcome Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 im gonna do the Heat next. and take my talents to bring South Beach to the NHL Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DC in Da House w/o a Doubt Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 im gonna do the Heat next. and take my talents to bring South Beach to the NHLjust playing Devil's advocate here, but isn't it a bit of a stretch to refer to Bradford Burgess as a "College Basketball Great"?The Jazz concept doesn't look too bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 im gonna do the Heat next. and take my talents to bring South Beach to the NHLjust playing Devil's advocate here, but isn't it a bit of a stretch to refer to Bradford Burgess as a "College Basketball Great"?The Jazz concept doesn't look too bad.thanks.. Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DC in Da House w/o a Doubt Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 im gonna do the Heat next. and take my talents to bring South Beach to the NHLjust playing Devil's advocate here, but isn't it a bit of a stretch to refer to Bradford Burgess as a "College Basketball Great"?The Jazz concept doesn't look too bad.______________thanks..hmm.... touche. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coast2CoastAM2006 Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 im gonna do the Heat next. and take my talents to bring South Beach to the NHLjust playing Devil's advocate here, but isn't it a bit of a stretch to refer to Bradford Burgess as a "College Basketball Great"?The Jazz concept doesn't look too bad.what does that have to do with the concept? as for the concept at hand, simplify the design. try to base it off of real life hockey jerseys. Don't try to get too cute with the design, just keep it simple. especially if you are new at paint or lack in artistry skills. Spoilers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 im gonna do the Heat next. and take my talents to bring South Beach to the NHLjust playing Devil's advocate here, but isn't it a bit of a stretch to refer to Bradford Burgess as a "College Basketball Great"?The Jazz concept doesn't look too bad.what does that have to do with the concept? as for the concept at hand, simplify the design. try to base it off of real life hockey jerseys. Don't try to get too cute with the design, just keep it simple. especially if you are new at paint or lack in artistry skills.hmmm.. I used a blank hockey template. and went from there. tried to base it off real hcckey jerseys. whats not simple about my Jazz concept? Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coast2CoastAM2006 Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 im gonna do the Heat next. and take my talents to bring South Beach to the NHLjust playing Devil's advocate here, but isn't it a bit of a stretch to refer to Bradford Burgess as a "College Basketball Great"?The Jazz concept doesn't look too bad.what does that have to do with the concept? as for the concept at hand, simplify the design. try to base it off of real life hockey jerseys. Don't try to get too cute with the design, just keep it simple. especially if you are new at paint or lack in artistry skills.hmmm.. I used a blank hockey template. and went from there. tried to base it off real hcckey jerseys. whats not simple about my Jazz concept?right now you have random splotches of color all over the jerseys. heres an example of a concept i did when i first joined the boards and i have zero artistry skills and i used paint shop pro.basically just use a basic striping pattern instead of random paint spots. trying to help ya out Spoilers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 im gonna do the Heat next. and take my talents to bring South Beach to the NHLjust playing Devil's advocate here, but isn't it a bit of a stretch to refer to Bradford Burgess as a "College Basketball Great"?The Jazz concept doesn't look too bad.what does that have to do with the concept? as for the concept at hand, simplify the design. try to base it off of real life hockey jerseys. Don't try to get too cute with the design, just keep it simple. especially if you are new at paint or lack in artistry skills.hmmm.. I used a blank hockey template. and went from there. tried to base it off real hcckey jerseys. whats not simple about my Jazz concept?right now you have random splotches of color all over the jerseys. heres an example of a concept i did when i first joined the boards and i have zero artistry skills and i used paint shop pro.basically just use a basic striping pattern instead of random paint spots. trying to help ya out well I used a blank template so ehh. I didnt get much to work with. and I tend to mess up striping and piping. but I could give it a whirly gig on later concepts. thanks for the idea. Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 now time for the team everyone want"s to take there talents too. South Beach baby! hockey style. I tried to keep the look simple and clean. hope I did well. i Made a white home. a red away (I always thought the Red Alternate with Miami on it looked good) and a black alternate with the MH flaming heat logo, I also edited the main logo to make the basketball look like a hockey puck. including a bigger version for a good look. its features on all three jerseys as shoulder patches. hope you likeMIAMI HEATLogoUniforms Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 any C&C on my Heat set? Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 What does a basketball rim have to do with hockey?Make the puck an actual puck, right now it looks like nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ink Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 What does a basketball rim have to do with hockey?Make the puck an actual puck, right now it looks like nothing.Agreed get rid of the rim. Also much better improvement over your other concepts its a lot more cleaner now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 I took a crack at re doing the heat logo. removed the rim. however the one with the rim will remain on the jersey"s as a alternate logo/patch. no other changes in this update Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ink Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 Now it doesn't look like a flam, you need to add the yellow back so it could look more like a burning hockey puck instead of a red blob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 Now it doesn't look like a flam, you need to add the yellow back so it could look more like a burning hockey puck instead of a red blob.done Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 You need to make the red puck black and then make the colors contrast to the color of the puck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 The more you futz with it, the worse it is getting. I would suggest starting over with the logo. Take some time removing the unneeded elements and find some clip art of a puck or something. Instead of removing all of the black lines, keep the ones at the top of the flame, but taper them, as they are what gives the logo definition. The jerseys themselves look decent, but more could be added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 13, 2011 Author Share Posted April 13, 2011 The more you futz with it, the worse it is getting. I would suggest starting over with the logo. Take some time removing the unneeded elements and find some clip art of a puck or something. Instead of removing all of the black lines, keep the ones at the top of the flame, but taper them, as they are what gives the logo definition. The jerseys themselves look decent, but more could be added.like what? Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 13, 2011 Author Share Posted April 13, 2011 logo redone. and I thought the black puck would look horrible. but it turned out decent I guess. Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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