Minnesota Wild Concept

[gsn93]

I'm a little hesitant to post this since this is only my third post here, but here it is.

Any thoughts.

[habsfan1]

You need to add something more to the bottom area. Even if it's not consistent with the arms, the way it is now feels empty.

For a first try, it's a nice concept though.

[tigerslionspistonshabs]

Ya the bottom needs more. I do think (in reality) they should focus more on green as a primary. Add some red trim to the current alternate and slap the Wolf/Bear head logo on the front. Voila.

[HawkeyHouse]

Bottom is to boring. The sleves remind me of a Wild/Stars mix. Looks cool.

[Keeb13r]

I don't think the red pants are a good idea, nor am I a fan of emphasizing the gold color over red. If anything, I would replace the gold with the wheat.

[north dakota]

I would make the striping on the away jersey red instead of yellow and you should get rid of the red pants.

[tvko]

Not feeling the numbers and the shade of yellow. Try using that "wheat" color, it looks good with their set.

Nice job for a third post though

[gsn93]

Here's an update:

- Replace yellow with wheat.

- Replace red pants with green version.

- Added striping along with bottom hem.

[Keeb13r]

That's much better!

[HawkeyHouse]

Much better, great work.

[aci]

I actually preferred your first go-around, with a few exceptions:

1) The single diving stripe on the hem is good.

2) The red helmet doesn't work. Generally, hockey helmets should match either the breezers (shorts) or the jersey. Usually, it's breezers for the coloured jersey, and then either white or yellow on the light-coloured jersey, depending on which colour the team's uniform is.

3) On the white jersey, if you make the two thin sleeve stripes red instead of white, it'll look much better.

And the yellow is way better than the wheat.

[nash61]

I'm gonna go the other way and say that the second one is better. The red helmet is the only thing that i would fix.

[BrandMooreArt]

get comfortable with being uncomfortable. dont be afraid to show your work! job well done here. im not much of a hockey follower so im not much help for this, but dont be afraid to post more often

[JaxNoles]

Nice update! Love the Wild's secondary mark you used.

[gsn93]

Thanks for all the feedback. Update: Which one looks better? A or B.

A:

B:

[HawkeyHouse]

I like A better.