gsn93 Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 I'm a little hesitant to post this since this is only my third post here, but here it is.Any thoughts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 You need to add something more to the bottom area. Even if it's not consistent with the arms, the way it is now feels empty.For a first try, it's a nice concept though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 Ya the bottom needs more. I do think (in reality) they should focus more on green as a primary. Add some red trim to the current alternate and slap the Wolf/Bear head logo on the front. Voila. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HawkeyHouse Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 Bottom is to boring. The sleves remind me of a Wild/Stars mix. Looks cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keeb13r Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 I don't think the red pants are a good idea, nor am I a fan of emphasizing the gold color over red. If anything, I would replace the gold with the wheat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
north dakota Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 I would make the striping on the away jersey red instead of yellow and you should get rid of the red pants. Woah! You think I'm Cody? My name is Carl Scott Simone and we just happen to share a birthday. BIG DEAL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tvko Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 Not feeling the numbers and the shade of yellow. Try using that "wheat" color, it looks good with their set.Nice job for a third post though You know what they say, "Traditionalist's can go die in a hole if they don't like it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gsn93 Posted April 26, 2011 Author Share Posted April 26, 2011 Here's an update: - Replace yellow with wheat. - Replace red pants with green version. - Added striping along with bottom hem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keeb13r Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 That's much better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HawkeyHouse Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 Much better, great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 I actually preferred your first go-around, with a few exceptions:1) The single diving stripe on the hem is good.2) The red helmet doesn't work. Generally, hockey helmets should match either the breezers (shorts) or the jersey. Usually, it's breezers for the coloured jersey, and then either white or yellow on the light-coloured jersey, depending on which colour the team's uniform is.3) On the white jersey, if you make the two thin sleeve stripes red instead of white, it'll look much better.And the yellow is way better than the wheat. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nash61 Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 I'm gonna go the other way and say that the second one is better. The red helmet is the only thing that i would fix. On September 20, 2012 at 0:50 AM, 'CS85 said: It's like watching the hellish undead creakily shuffling their way out of the flames of a liposuction clinic dumpster fire. On February 19, 2012 at 9:30 AM, 'pianoknight said: Story B: Red Wings go undefeated and score 100 goals in every game. They also beat a team comprised of Godzilla, the ghost of Abraham Lincoln, 2 Power Rangers and Betty White. Oh, and they played in the middle of Iraq on a military base. In the sand. With no ice. Santa gave them special sand-skates that allowed them to play in shorts and t-shirts in 115 degree weather. Jesus, Zeus and Buddha watched from the sidelines and ate cotton candy. POTD 5/24/12, POTD 2/26/17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 get comfortable with being uncomfortable. dont be afraid to show your work! job well done here. im not much of a hockey follower so im not much help for this, but dont be afraid to post more often GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaxNoles Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 Nice update! Love the Wild's secondary mark you used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gsn93 Posted April 27, 2011 Author Share Posted April 27, 2011 Thanks for all the feedback. Update: Which one looks better? A or B.A: B: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HawkeyHouse Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 I like A better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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