jaha32 Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 It definitely needs a jaw and possible some neck shading. It's decent, but it's not smooth (it's probably the program you use) and has edges where it could be smooth. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
creativelysain Posted May 5, 2011 Share Posted May 5, 2011 With Neo's permission I have been toying around with this idea for a couple of nights. I made some slight adjustments that might or might not have helped overall, you guys be the judge. Now I just made a few tweaks but the foundation was set by Neo. All I did was vectorize it and clean up some lines, and streamline it somewhat. Neo did the hard work creating the idea.I've got an idea for something later on that might be helpful to board members that I'll present when I can get my thoughts together. Follow me on twitter @jrsainGo Heels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undead Posted May 6, 2011 Share Posted May 6, 2011 Looks really nice cleaned up, creativelysain. The chin, mouth, and nose are really well done. I don't think you need the vertical line coming from the hood and going down the face. It seems unnecessary and just takes up space.Great job, you two! Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 6, 2011 Author Share Posted May 6, 2011 With Neo's permission I have been toying around with this idea for a couple of nights. I made some slight adjustments that might or might not have helped overall, you guys be the judge. Now I just made a few tweaks but the foundation was set by Neo. All I did was vectorize it and clean up some lines, and streamline it somewhat. Neo did the hard work creating the idea.I've got an idea for something later on that might be helpful to board members that I'll present when I can get my thoughts together.Nice work. Thanks. The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted May 6, 2011 Share Posted May 6, 2011 Nice cleanup. looks good. One idea you could consider depending on if youre done or not, but I think if the hood covered more of his forehead leaving his eyes in the hood's shadow below (so the eye would no longer be seen), that this guy would look even more evil/mysterious. Just an idea, but either way, nice job, creativelysain! DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 9, 2011 Author Share Posted May 9, 2011 Bump.Here's my personal tweaks on the face of creativelysain's version: The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 Bump.Here's my personal tweaks on the face of creativelysain's version:I really love this and all your other work is top notch. Your comics are pretty funny too. This logo is very good, I especially like the colors they work great together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 9, 2011 Author Share Posted May 9, 2011 Bump.Here's my personal tweaks on the face of creativelysain's version:I really love this and all your other work is top notch. Your comics are pretty funny too. This logo is very good, I especially like the colors they work great together.Which of my comics do you like the most? And do you think there should be an official deviantART thread here? The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 I love all your The Impopster comics. And yes, we should make a dA thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 The original reminded me of the witch in Sleeping Beauty, or Helen Thomas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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