Julius Seizure Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 I'm pretty set on the color sceme, but I'm up for critiques! I want to call them the Tokyo Yamatos. Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted May 18, 2011 Author Share Posted May 18, 2011 The homes:...and the roads: Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wILL-INI Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 Ohhh, haha I love the logo! Also dig the helmets. I might put a thicker outline (the grey one) on the main. But nice work. "Classic" does not mean it gets a free pass for being bad design.Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted May 18, 2011 Author Share Posted May 18, 2011 Ohhh, haha I love the logo! Also dig the helmets. I might put a thicker outline (the grey one) on the main. But nice work.Ah ha! I meant to make that a white outline, but I see what you mean. I could tweak it a bit. Thanks for the feedback! I have a few teams in the works. A league if you will...stay tuned! Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueSky Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 Hope they have better luck than this Yamato... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exaccardi Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 The helmet is actually terrific. I would put a little more effort into the actual jersey, but i think the piping and the numbers are right- they remind me of a NPB team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Somppi Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 Make the facemasks orange to match the logo like you've already done I love when people do that to helmets, it looks great. Auburn University Alum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 incredible!One think I would change is the colors. not the actual color scheme itself, but right now the colors are a little too vibrant and defaulted, if that makes any sense.they need to be less magic marker looking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted May 18, 2011 Author Share Posted May 18, 2011 Orange facemask, and darkened the blue by 30 pts. Great input, guys! I've always liked the bright colors and bold typefacing of Japanese advertising, and really wanted a vibrant color scheme to commemorate it. I was thinking of using a different font for the wordmark. I'm happy with the numbers, but some of the letter characters look funny. Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GFB Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 Love, love the logo... but the colors almost ruin it. The two blues are far too bright and too close in hue to be used together. I would darken one or lighten the other...If it were up to me, I would like to see a Black/Deep Red/Gold color scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted May 18, 2011 Author Share Posted May 18, 2011 Like this? Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perfect Zero Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 I think your first color scheme was actually quite good. The one thing I don't like is the piping down the side of the jersey. It clutters it up in my eyes, and I think it would look cleaner if you moved it to where the dark blue ended, or if you took it off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jhero34 Posted May 19, 2011 Share Posted May 19, 2011 those helmets are top notch, love them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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